SN canon drabbles: 2.15-2.18

Apr 18, 2008 07:35

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previously

I am rowing, I am rowing

Dean is pissing him off by breathing. Sam doesn’t understand why Dean’s presence is driving him up the wall, but Dean isn’t doing a damn thing to make it easier.
            He knows he should be going easier on Dean, with Meg using his possessed body to beat the shit out of him, but Dean’s ( Read more... )

gen, point of view: second person, title: i, title: t, rated pg, wordcount: drabble, fic, title: a, series: supernatural canon drabbles, fanfic: supernatural, point of view: third person, tv fic

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iamstealthyone April 18 2008, 13:49:34 UTC
Good job on these!

I am rowing, I am rowing

Good job capturing Sam’s utter frustration in that ep.

Ah, sweetling, the price of love

I really like this POV, and the fear and determination you convey.

two fireflies died unnoticed

Ow, ow, ow. Oh, boys.

Great angst as they’re thisclose to Sam killing Madison. And the second-person POV works really well.

He’s crying. Too old for your arms now, too grown for big brother to scoop him up and make everything better with tickles and a promise.

Lovely, aching imagery.

He takes the gun back and goes to kill the last of his innocence.

Oh, Sam

If they knew sweet little you

His adoring gaze makes her feel like a queen, and he’s pretty much the cutest thing she’s ever seen.

*g* Cute drabble!

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tigriswolf April 18 2008, 21:58:59 UTC
Thank you so much!

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papered April 18 2008, 21:55:27 UTC
I got this.
He’s crying. Too old for your arms now, too grown for big brother to scoop him up and make everything better with tickles and a promise.

That makes me tearful. *-*

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tigriswolf April 18 2008, 21:59:57 UTC
Thank you so much!

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