it exhausts me to watch you - SN fic - PG13

[tigriswolf]

Title: it exhausts me to watch you
Fandom: “Supernatural”
Disclaimer: the Winchesters aren’t mine. title from Sylvia Plath
Warnings: pre-series; AU
Pairings: none
Rating: PG13
Wordcount: 4480
Point of view: third
Notes: I wanted to write a drabble while waiting for class to start, so I gave myself the prompt green. This is the result. It’s a bit more than

Comments

[soxykitty]

Aww that was so adorable! :oD

[tigriswolf]

Thank you!

[katriel1987]

[tigriswolf]

Thank you for reading!

[aja_evenstar]

That was great!!

I love that Dean became attached, and that he didn't really understand the attachment for a great deal of it. Its written really simply, which i also like because Dean is younger, so it helps give him a younger feel. He wouldn't be a child obviously, but it does have a childlike sense to it, which kind of reminds me of Cally as she's basically a baby.

I really liked it =)

[tigriswolf]

Thank you!

[iamstealthyone]

Nicely done. :) Good job with the h/c and with showing Dean and Cally bond. I felt so bad for him after he killed her brother, was quite relieved he didn’t have to kill her after all.

Favorite lines:

Deal with the babies and go home. Deal with the babies and he’ll be fine.

I like how you can feel his exhaustion in these lines.

those planet-sized eyes

Awesome description.

He tells Dad everything, ending with when he pulled up outside the apartment, too exhausted to do anything but die.

Oh, Dean.

[tigriswolf]

Thank you for reading!

[eloise_bright]

I'm not sure why, but this story makes me want to cry. In a good way. Dean fighting for Cally, standing up to Dad for something he wants. Something just for him, that's not about Dad, or Sammy. That's perfect.

You have such a wonderful imagination.

[tigriswolf]

Thank you so much!