ablation - SN fic - PG13

Dec 14, 2007 08:40

 
Title: ablation
Fandom: “Supernatural”
Disclaimer: not my characters; just for fun.
Warnings: blasphemy; future AU; spoilers for up to “Bedtime Stories”
Pairings: Azazel(Yellow-Eyed Demon)/Crossroad’s Demon; John/Mary
Rating: PG13
Wordcount: 3845
Point of view: third
Dedication:
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gen, rated pg-thirteen, fanfic: the bible, wordcount: three-thousand plus, fic, title: a, fanfic: supernatural, point of view: third person, tv fic

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iamstealthyone December 14 2007, 15:22:17 UTC
Yikes, but Sam went to disturbing lengths to save Dean in this one. Eek! Good storytelling here, with shades of darkness and light throughout.

Favorite lines:

Sam is a leader. Dean is a follower. But-and this is where Azazel went wrong-Sam will always follow Dean.

Nicely phrased.

But they, the remaining Winchesters, were still caught in his plan, two struggling flies in a giant spider web.

Good analogy.

Sam laughs. “I did a bad thing this morning,” he says.

Eek!

That’s not funny, Sam.”

Sam turns, face serious and solemn. “No, it’s not,” he agrees, and the date screams into Dean’s head. “It’s not funny at all.”

Eek, eek, eek!

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tigriswolf December 14 2007, 18:00:38 UTC
Thank you so much!

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epeeblade December 14 2007, 16:05:47 UTC
Holy moly, that's incredible. I really enjoyed this.

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tigriswolf December 14 2007, 18:00:59 UTC
Huzzah!

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epeeblade December 15 2007, 00:43:15 UTC
I'm intrigued by your Mary. You always have her be supernatural in some way, but I can't quite peg if she's supposed to be a demon, an angel or something else. What is she?

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tigriswolf December 15 2007, 02:27:16 UTC
She's a fallen angel, the descendant of a demon, a demon, or just a woman caught up in something entirely beyond her control.

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tigriswolf December 14 2007, 18:01:25 UTC
Thank you so much!

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tigriswolf December 14 2007, 20:44:29 UTC
Thank you for reading!

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theatervine December 14 2007, 20:30:23 UTC
So creepy yet, done in a way that works. I love that Jesus gave Sam Dean. Beautiful.

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tigriswolf December 14 2007, 20:44:57 UTC
Thank you for reading!

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theatervine December 16 2007, 17:05:14 UTC
But of course darling!

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