A Satirical Scrooge (3b/?) - Stephen's Ghost part 2

[tigris18]

Hey!

I know I had told some people that I'd have the next chapter up by this past weekend, well...that didn't happen. Partly because I was too excited about Stephen's Christmas Special that I couldn't focus on my story. Hehe! ^_^ And also, I had lots of school work to do. Blah!
Anyways, I have the second part of the 3rd chapter finished and am busily

Comments

[sailorptah]

Stephen messing with Bill is priceless.

Poor Jon - I hope he gets a pick-me-up at the end.

[tigris18]

Good, I'm glad you like Stephen messing with Bill. :-) It was fun to write. Stephen is supposed to bring amusment to the angsty and somber sides of the story.

Yeah, I know - poor Jon. But he will get little pockets of happiness in the near future, I assure you. ;-)

Thanks for reading and commenting!

[sheblobbers]

Oh goodie. I'm glad Stephen will be in the rest of the story, I was a little sad when I thought he'd just be a ghost and then gone... but YAY! He's in the rest o' the story!! Well... until the ghosts have finished doing it all in one night, I'm sure. But that's still good enough for me.

[tigris18]

Yeah, I couldn't let Stephen JUST be the ghost of "Marley" - that would be so unfair. Plus he has a connection in the story later on (with Jon), so I had to let Stephen stay for the rest of the story. :-)
Oh, and Lewis will be showing up more in the future! Heehee!

I'm so glad you're enjoying it! I plan to have the fourth chapter posted soon. *crosses fingers*

Thanks for reading and commenting!

[karenknismesis]

I'm loving this more and more with each chapter :D

[colbertican]

This is truly priceless. XD I love how Stephen gets so wrapped up in the correctness of it all. I was going right along with him, because I practically know the script by heart. (i was in a production of it in November, remember?) anyway, I freakin' died when Stephen was just messing with him. XDXD this is priceless. i love it so much, as I've said before. :P