Brigits_Flame Entry

[tigerstriped86]

Here's my entry from brigits_flame May 2011, Week 1.  Three different prompt levels to choose from and I think that my best fit is in the intermediate category. 
Prompts: Good omen, "There was a spark", Verisimilitude

PG, but allusions (I won't say to what, I'll leave that like an ink blot to your imagination).
Word count: 157, Poetry

Title: At the Breakfast Table

Comments

[keppiehed]

I am glad to see poetry once again from you. I love to see what you've done with the prompt of "spark"! I couldn't identify the omen, but I didn't want to pick it apart too much. Nice subject. I enjoyed it!

[tigerstriped86]

First off, thats the most adorable icon ever. EVER.

Anywho, its a less traditional omen and far less tangible...I probably picked it up somewhere in one of my fictional history books lying around here somewhere...*looks around at the book type carnage*

Thanks for enjoying the poetry and congrats on winning last month!

[osoreranai]

This was pretty. Nice use of the intermediate prompt. I think you could have gone a bit further and done the advanced, though.

I mean, if you wanted.

[tigerstriped86]

I'm kind of a chicken, prompt wise, and I wanted to hold back in case I didn't get the advanced one in but I think it snuck in there a little bit and I was like...eh...its still pretty good so I'll leave it on intermediate.

[tigerstriped86]

Thanks for your comments! That's all really nice to read and I'm glad you're enjoying my poetry! =)