Well, this came minutes after rereading it... and, I have another bunny in the works that I'm about to start on in just a minute... and at one in the morning, too!!!
You're right. And it kind of loses its "oomph!" in longer works because it can make the reader wonder too much and distract them from the plot. But in a short piece, it grabs your attention and holds it there.
*shivers* Oooh, this is delightful. Very hot, very sweet. I only wish it had been longer and a little more explicit! I hope to read more from you soon.
This is lovely, Tigerlily! Loving and sexy, and I very much enjoyed that little turnaround on the pov, especially this, "And now, you understand." And here I am, not usually a pervy Hobbit-fancier - but I quite like this. :)
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I'm glad you're back :)
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It's always good to know that my stuff appeals to a "wider audience," if you will.
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