Hey, I'm here to read your rewrites! I remember you telling me about James Bennington being the base for Edgar, looks wise.
Wow, Melody never gives up on romance, does she? I think after fourteen failed marriages, I'd be inclined to admit defeat! XD She looks like she might have embraced anorexia as a way of punishing herself for the demise of all her husbands. IS NOT YOUR FAULT, MELODY. On the other hand, I'd be concerned to marry her if I were JB! Unless of course he's like my character Isaac and enjoys courting disaster.
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Wow, Melody never gives up on romance, does she? I think after fourteen failed marriages, I'd be inclined to admit defeat! XD She looks like she might have embraced anorexia as a way of punishing herself for the demise of all her husbands. IS NOT YOUR FAULT, MELODY. On the other hand, I'd be concerned to marry her if I were JB! Unless of course he's like my character Isaac and enjoys courting disaster.
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The run-down of her husbands goes like this:
John: They married when they were 18, and he was just too immature for marriage. He filed for divorce.
Roger: He was a cleptomaniac who was more in jail than at home. Melody filed for divorce.
Harry: This could have been The One, but he disappeared on an expedition and was declared dead.
Dylan: She married him on the rebound, but divorced him when he wouldn't do anything about his gambling problem.
Ivan: Melody woke up married to him after a week-long binge, following her divorce from Dylan. Their marriage was annulled.
Bob-Joe: Serial adulterer. Divorce.
Kyle: He filed for divorce when he discovered that all her marriages lasted only 6 months on average.
Norman: Melody went shallow, and married him for his looks. He then realized he was gay.
Orville: One of the most bizarre cases: He turned himself into a stone statue after an alchemy mishap. Divorce was granted for " ( ... )
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