Exchange fic for caffeinekitty

Sep 03, 2011 05:30

The edge of the sky

PG
Gen, Keith-centric
Characters: Keith, Karina, Nathan, John
Word count: 3300~

Exchange fic for caffeinekitty. The prompt was "anything Keith-centric. Yes, really, anything -- angsty, fluffy, cracky, any pairing/no pairing, whatever angle the filler wants to take."I'm terribly sorry for making you wait so long! D: rl decided to get in the ( Read more... )

fanwork exchange: round one, fanmade: fic

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caffeinekitty September 3 2011, 04:16:18 UTC
"Karina let out a little strangled noise that sounded suspiciously like ‘aww’, but she was quick to hide it behind a cough."

*points* That was me, all through this fic, only with less hiding. Oh, Keith... why are you so sweet? I swear, as I was reading I just wanted to reach through the screen and hug him.

This was absolutely gorgeous, I adore it to pieces! I love how bittersweet and almost... dreamlike it is. I loved John, I loved the interactions with the others, I loved the references to Cis (and this -- "Sometimes he wished he were this good at talking to real people." in relation to her was probably the biggest "Oh, Keith...!" moment of all), I loved the implications of how the series might end because something like that would hit him awfully hard.

Thank you so, so much, this was absolutely perfect!

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chaosmyth September 4 2011, 15:43:05 UTC
I'm really glad you liked it! ;___;♥ Keith is completely different from the characters I usually write, so I had a hard time trying to get his "voice" right, and I was really worried it wouldn't be good enough. Thank you for the wonderful comment! ♥

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chaosmyth September 4 2011, 15:18:25 UTC
Thank you! Nathan's part was my favourite to write ;)

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