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[schweinsty]

Oh, I liked this. The line 'a flock of squawking, winged rodents' really struck me as unique, as did the last line. Really neat :D.

[starianprincess]

'like a cloud of dandruff' sounds just like Hiyoshi. lol Adorable! :)

[jenjess98]

Alright, I stumbled upon your journal, and this was one of the first things I saw.
"the fowl things" made me laugh. Punny, aren't you? xD