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Regrets, I've Had A Few

Sep 06, 2010 08:51

Name: tifaching
Story Title: Regrets, I've Had A Few
Character/Relationships: John, Dean, Sam
Rating: G
Warnings: none
Summary: John reflects on time lost
A/N: Written for the prompt "lost moments" at spn_last author standing

( Batman plates. John doesn't know why they suddenly pop into his mind, what dredged this memory up after almost twenty-three years, but all of a sudden he's seeing them )

dean, gen, hurt!dean, john, sam, pastor jim, pg

Comments 44

orehime September 9 2010, 12:55:27 UTC

WAUUGGGGGHHHHHH!!!! *tears* Oh, Winchesters =(

tifaching September 13 2010, 03:54:47 UTC

*hands you tissues* Glad the emotions came through.

laurapetri September 9 2010, 16:23:05 UTC

OMG JOHN!!!!!!!AWESOME SNIPPETS THAT SHOW HIM PERFECTLY

tifaching September 13 2010, 03:56:03 UTC

Thank you! So glad you enjoyed and I'm glad John came through as the conflicted, but ultimately good father he was.

morganslady September 9 2010, 21:14:59 UTC

John remembering these very moments is so heartbreaking.

tifaching September 13 2010, 03:56:21 UTC

Thank you.

candycanerica September 9 2010, 22:16:51 UTC

Oh, so good. Especially since I just watched that episode the other day. Poor John, he tried to be a good father, I really believe he did.

The moments with Sammy's first steps and Dean in the motel room during his graduation, those were really striking. VERY good portrait of John and the boys.

tifaching September 13 2010, 03:57:24 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad John trying came through. He just had his priorities a little skewed, but he came through, tragically, in the end.

dante_s_hell September 10 2010, 01:07:30 UTC

Wow, just wow. Sad and so true. Very emotionally wrenching. Wonderful. Sam walking toward Dean and Dean talking, what a great image.

tifaching September 13 2010, 03:58:35 UTC

Glad you enjoyed! John missing Sam's first steps was practically guaranteed, I'm just glad he realized what he missed.