Comments | tifaching: Under Repair(the feathers of an angel remix)

tifaching

Under Repair(the feathers of an angel remix)

May 18, 2014 20:15

( The park’s not really on the way home, but Dean might, maybe, be a little too drunk to care. )

remix, dean, humor, gen, hurt!dean, pg

Comments 24

skeletncloset May 19 2014, 00:30:53 UTC

Dude . . . I went from horrible unease to laughter and the transition was seamless. Loved it!

tifaching May 19 2014, 01:02:29 UTC

Ha, yes! I should have gone on with the evil angel babies (and now they might have to show up somewhere else) but in the original fic they were geese so I just kept up with that theme. Glad it worked. :)

a_phoenixdragon May 19 2014, 00:37:31 UTC

I dunno whether to laugh, cry or facepalm. *Beams* This was marvelous!! Dean paranoid and twitchy over GEESE. I mean...smart, but angelic geese?! *CACKLES* No...they don't need angel-backing to be dicks.

Awesome fic, bb...

*HUGS*

tifaching May 19 2014, 01:00:44 UTC

LOL, in the original he thought they were some sort of geese woman Valkyrie type things. :) And Canada Geese (hell, birds of any kind) are, by definition, dick.

Thanks sweets!

borgmama1of5 May 19 2014, 03:00:50 UTC

It's funny...and yet it isn't at all...because of what is really wrong that Dean can't fix--

And that will leave Sam alone with only the rotting timber in his mind

You managed to blend humor, horror, and angst in less than 1000 words in the way the best episodes do--kudos!

.. tifaching May 19 2014, 11:02:45 UTC

Thank you. As soon as I saw de_nugis in the remix challenge, Dean and the geese and Sam's wall demanded to be written. :)

indiachick May 19 2014, 04:22:45 UTC

I love this. I just read the original, and this remix is perfect. Angelic geese! And it's funny, but with an undercurrent of sadness that mixes together nicely. And this was punchy: If Dean’s off his game, Sam’s not even on the field. Dean’s brother spends his days searching out normal, everyday obituaries online and cataloguing them. If Dean doesn’t make it out of here he wonders what Sam will make of his obit.

♥

tifaching May 19 2014, 11:14:06 UTC

I have so much love for the original (as I do for everything de_nugis writes) and jumped at the chance to remix that little bit of it. Drunk Dean menacing and being menaced by geese could never be not funny but the backdrop of the wall falling and Sam's issues do make for some lovely angst.

Glad you enjoyed, thanks!

ephermeralk May 19 2014, 06:15:38 UTC

hahah. I agree with you. Canadian geese are dicks. Lovely words. Even when it's amusing, there's still Sam at home to be worried about, and the fact that dean won't ever stop trying to repair Sam. ♥ That's what I love the most.

tifaching May 19 2014, 11:17:04 UTC

In my experience, most birds are dicks. :) Nope. Dean will never stop trying to repair San even when it gets him into lots of trouble. But I love that about him too.

Thanks!