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DN -- Full of Surprises

May 08, 2009 17:40

Title: Full of Surprises
Fandom: Death Note
Pairing: Mello/Near
Rating: R
Word Count: 1,925
Warnings: language, torture, blood, sex, bondage, guns... AU
Summary: In which Mello is a Mafia wunderkind, and Near is a stool pigeon.
Author's Note: For chamyl, with ♥ !! ...because the most hentai thing I've ever written totally means ♥ . Ohhhh, dear. XD It's ( Read more... )

[genre] romance, [genre] porn, [rating] r, [genre] alternate universe, [character - dn] mello, [pairing - dn] mello/near, [fandom] death note, [length] 2k, [genre] drama, [genre] humor, [year] 2009, [character - dn] near

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tierfal May 9 2009, 06:27:06 UTC

Glad to hear it! 8D

I'm such a sick puppy. :3

sabriel75 May 10 2009, 06:17:43 UTC

Kill me now! Near's hot. Near's f'ing hot. OMG! Near totally pawned Mello in interrogation no less.

Uhm... yeah. That's one warped ride Mello's taking, but hey life's no fun without someone to love ;P

tierfal May 10 2009, 19:55:31 UTC

8D! I don't even remember when exactly it struck me that Near would TOTALLY take advantage of the situation when Mello least expected. XD

No fun at all! 8D

chamyl May 10 2009, 10:18:35 UTC

HEHEHEHE :>
/first reaction

Okay, now for something that makes more sense. What can I say, I LOVED IT!!! I like how Near's such a dirty bastard, and I love how Mello loves it. Masochistic much, uh Mel? XD

And, HAWT, obviously. I was totally not going THERE YOU GO MELLO SCREW HIS PALE ASS ON THE FLOOR all along. Ttly not. What makes you think that...?

And Near saves him in the end ♥ Oh Near, I knew you weren't that much of a bastard after all |D
And I knew you'd write something that would put me in a cheerfully kinky mood XD ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

tierfal May 10 2009, 19:59:23 UTC

That is precisely the first reaction I was looking for, so I'm glad to hear it! 8D

YAY! 8D And haaaa, Mello makes masochism look good. :P

Hee, I almost went there. Only then Near was like WAIT WAIT LET'S TRY THIS >D, and I let him. This thing is nipping at my heels for a sequel, though, and maybe when school's over, I can stop pushing it back. XD

Yay Near! 8D And yay kinky cheer!! >DDDD

ca_te May 12 2009, 17:42:33 UTC

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This is amazing!!
I really loved it! <3

tierfal May 13 2009, 07:16:30 UTC

Thank you, I'm glad!! :D

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tierfal June 3 2009, 17:52:34 UTC

Near is impressively impassive at the worst of times, the crazy kid. XD The ending of this sucker was kind of begging for a sequel, but I have no idea where I'd go or what I'd do, so unfortunately the odds of me following through are somewhat low... but I'm glad you enjoyed it, and thanks so much! :)