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DN -- Red Skinny Jeans

Jan 26, 2009 21:21

Title: Red Skinny Jeans
Fandom: Death Note
Pairing: Matt/Mello
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 9,390
Prompts: "Christmas Eve" and "pillow fight"
Warnings: language, language, language, Mello, alcohol, mild violence, Mello, snark, sarcasm, Mello, non-explicit sex
Summary: I'm really not that hard to get along with. Listening to Matt talk, you'd think I ( Read more... )

[pairing - dn] matt/mello, [holiday] christmas, [genre] alternate canon, [genre] romance, [character - dn] mello, [character - dn] matt, [length] 9k, [fandom] death note, [genre] humor, [rating] pg-13, [year] 2009, [character - dn] near

Comments 2

eltea January 30 2009, 01:15:48 UTC

♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
You are epic amazing and I love you. =D

Some of my absolute favorite parts:

“It looks like fucking Barbie fucking threw up in my laundry basket!” - I laughed so hard when I read this (and simultaneously figured out what had happened) that I almost cried. XD

I sort of nodded-shifted-my-weight to acknowledge Rester. Dude still looked like he wanted to eviscerate me and deck the halls with my entrails. - …I can’t even put my finger on why this is so ridiculously hilarious, but it is. XD Maybe the morbid comment combined with such a Christmas-y reference. XD

And hell-Matt probably didn’t want to be ravished, certainly not by the red-coated prospective star of ‘Naughty List XXX.’ - I loved the whole discussion about Mello’s outfit making him look like an elf out of a seasonally-themed porn movie. XD And… oh, the mental images. XD

“I want to protect you,” he said. - Awwww. ♥ And then the crash, omg; that was just a feet-out-from-under-you moment. o_o

He gave me a pause to realize that I’d just admitted ( ... )

tierfal January 30 2009, 04:39:39 UTC

YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY. x3

I am sooooo glad you liked it; it was... ridiculously fun. XD

I seem to have a thing for blond guys turning the whites pink. Second chapter of HaM, wasn't it? XD

I wonder where I can procure a Mello porn movie. Oh, wait, somebody just has to make an AMV of a doujin, and we'll be good. :P

I don't even remember where the crash thing came from; I was just like, "They probably wouldn't want to be out driving then," and was like "Hmm," and... yeah. O_o I liked the way it turned out as something very sudden and kind of understated in a lot of ways. :O

♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ I love you, toooo, darlingggg!!! ^^