FMA -- Loud and Clear: The Twelfth Cup of Coffee, Chapter 1

[tierfal]

Title: Loud and Clear: The Twelfth Cup of Coffee
Fandom: Fullmetal Alchemist
Pairing: Roy/Ed (with some Al/Win)
Rating: R
Word Count: 44,500 (7,065 this chapter)
Warnings: language, modern!AU, smutzorz and semi-smutzorz in later chapters, sketchzorz in all of them
Summary: The thing with Roy is founded on coffee snobbery and stupid text messages

Comments

whAT ARE YOU DOING TO ME????

[goldnboymustang]

This is... I just... I can't... I love this so incredibly much. I was so excited the entire time I was reading this and the fangirly sounds I was making, just. Ugh. You're amazing and this is amazing and I can't wait to read more.

RE: whAT ARE YOU DOING TO ME????

[tierfal]

Ahhhhhh, I'm so glad you're enjoying it! :3 Thanks so much for reading! I'm going to see if I can't keep up a relatively regular update schedule, but I'm notoriously bad about that lately… :x

[amethyst_koneko]

SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!! More tierfal fic!!! :D Nothing makes me happier than good ficcage and yours is pretty damned awesome! :) Speaking of pretty damned awesome, Ed's inner dialogue is the best - sometimes funny, sometimes sad, but always quintessentially quirky Ed. :) Ed's so busy tearing himself down in his own head that he can't see how smitten Roy obviously is, how hopeful Roy is that he can have a chance with Ed. :( I have a dilemma now of who is hotter - Roy in his suit or Ed in his. It's a shame that this dilemma will never have a resolution because thinking about it much makes my brain start to melt! ^_^

[tierfal]

fjdklajfdals, thank you!! :3 So glad you're enjoying it! \o/

Ed's brain is such a fantastic place to visit, hahaha. XD Poor kid. XD'

I think the solution may be to put them both in their suits and stand them next to each other and keep them there for a long… long… long time. :'D

[richelle2972]

I agree. I was squeeing (internally since I'm stuck in lab...just like Ed :D) through the whole thing. I love how Roy is all prim and proper and texts with perfect grammar and capital letters while Ed is all lowercase and shorthand. Totally perfect characterization. LOVED IT!!!

[tierfal]

Ahahaha, I was totally thinking of you every time I sent poor Ed in to lab on a weekend or a late night. :c No rest for the graduate students!

Ed's texting style morphed pretty much directly out of Edblog, whether I liked it or not… I considered having him use textspeak, but it just. I can't. Write it. So I gave up. :'D

Thank you so much for reading, bb~~~~~~!!

[dragonimp]

Insecure and socially awkward Ed is such love. (Clearly Roy thinks so.)

[tierfal]

Ha! I don't think it's any secret these days that that's how I prefer to write him, and my Roy just seems to eat it up… :'D

Thank you for reading, ahhhhhhh~ ♥