FMA -- Pretty Good Company (Part II)

Jun 26, 2012 21:19

Title: Pretty Good Company
Fandom: Fullmetal Alchemist
Pairing: Roy/Ed
Rating: R
Word Count: 14,730
Warnings: language, explicit sex, major spoilers for Brotherhood
Summary: “You haven’t changed. Things have changed around you. I assume that’s what you’re running from.”
Author's Note: This is Partie Deux! Partie Un est ici.

“Cuddling is boring.” “Hush.” )

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akainagi September 7 2012, 01:23:46 UTC

“Besides,” Roy says. “Anticipation is exciting.”

“Fuck anticipation,” Edward mutters.
Anticipation also makes for excellent fics like this one.

So he locked it up. He jotted notes about the contents on the side of the container (amazing amazing amazing gone), but he has spent the interim trying not to piece the spears of sensation and the half-memories back together into coherency.
Speaking of amazing - that line is.

And let us not forget the very hot, very hearbreaking flashback sex. And the amazingly hot, snarky, beautiful conflcted present sex.

At this point, Roy’s vocabulary has pretty much dissolved into Fuck, good, Ed
Yeah. We can relate.

Roy doesn’t really like to think about the implications of the fact that moments like this one are the closest he gets to religion.
Yup. Roy fucking Ed into the matress: a come-to-Jesus-experience for all involved.

Good. Very very very ... uh ... good. I would have better adjectives, but I think my brain is broken.

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tierfal September 8 2012, 20:01:00 UTC
Roy fucking Ed into the matress: a come-to-Jesus-experience for all involved.
PFFFFFFFFFFFF hahahaaaaaa. XD It's true, though! X'D

ajlkfjdslkfds, I am so delighted you enjoyed reading. :D Thanks so much for stopping by! ♥

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ca11iope September 9 2012, 14:09:16 UTC
Well it took me a while to get back here *stupid-real-life-crap-getting-in-the-way snarl* but here I am, and so happy to be here. I just love your stuff. I just love your story. I just love the humor and the angst and the burning hot passion. Oh, and the sticky, sweaty sex. Yeah. That too. And especially this line, "They’re moving together now, smoothly, collaboratively; Edward is, unsurprisingly, an unsettlingly quick study, and now they’re both seeking closeness instead of closure." That's when I saw the happy ending on the way. Right there. Beautiful.

Thanks for making my day with this. I'll be back for more of course, as soon as RL allows it. <3

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tierfal September 9 2012, 22:33:15 UTC
Awwwww, thank you so much!! :3

lol, I… yeah, sticky, sweaty sex is totally mandatory to end a fic when when I've put readers through so much of my crap by that point! XD

I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Thank you for reading!! ♥

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