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Original -- Not Too Bright

Jan 27, 2011 21:53

Title: Not Too Bright
Rating: G
Word Count: 215
Warnings: angel!fail
Prompt: Your touch is electric / I felt it the first time you held me / The way we connected / So easily - 'Bliss' - John Mayer with Alice Peacock at pulped_fictions
Summary: In which Maion learns the hard way.
Author's Note: Prompt abuse is a serious offense. So is the art of the PUNCHLINE! ( Read more... )

[year] 2011, [special] eltea made me do it, [genre] humor, [length] 500 or less, [character - original] vincent duval, [rating] g, [original] assorted, [character - original] maion

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tierfal January 31 2011, 01:46:02 UTC

I like your userpic, too! 8D

"Pout" is one of my favorites, haha. XD It's so evocative - and it and the Significant Capitals are such wonderful easy ways to cheat when you don't have a normal joke prepared! ;D

I'm so glad you enjoyed it, and thank you for reading! ♥

hiza_chan January 28 2011, 07:33:33 UTC

OH MY GOD, I LOVE YOU. CAN I HAVE YOUR BABIES?! ♥

These characters are so endearing.

tierfal January 31 2011, 01:47:22 UTC

OF COURSE YOU CAN BUT I HAVE TO WARN YOU THAT I WILL CORRUPT THEM AND TWIST THEIR BRAINS ♥

I am delighted that you like them. :D Someday I will get a slightly dumb golden retriever puppy and name it Maion. XD

alias_amy January 28 2011, 14:23:17 UTC

Ha! These two have such great chemistry, as always, but this is particularly fun with the whole, it's going to hurt you exchange.

tierfal January 31 2011, 01:48:15 UTC

Thank you! :D Maion's millennia-defying naïveté is without a doubt my favorite part of his character, hee. XD

jobey_in_error January 28 2011, 14:59:43 UTC

HAHAHAHAHAHA. I loved this snippet. All of it was great, and the last line was somehow even better. More please?

You also had the perfect icon for this piece, so I'm throwing a perfect icon for my response back atcha.

tierfal January 31 2011, 01:50:35 UTC

Why, thank you! 8D And I think you already found a bit more, but in case you ever find yourself jonesing for their particular brand of WTF, Vincent has his own tag full of… increasingly old and poorly-written adventures, haha. XD

I so totally dig the Awesome Dog icon. Which is what I always call it in my head

sabriel75 January 28 2011, 15:04:47 UTC

All the sarcasm gets an extra dose of irony in that last line. Now that's the proper way to go about mocking life. Do it with an angel fingering an electrical socket. Thanks for this!

It made my day!

tierfal January 31 2011, 01:51:20 UTC

Maion should probably keep his hands to himself next time, but somehow I doubt he's learned his lesson. :D Thank you for reading it (and I'm so glad to hear that, bb)! ♥