Harry Potter and Bella Swan: A Conversation

[tiemeinbows]

I have much more important things I should be doing, but I've been wanting to finish this for ages, and I had a mini heart-attack earlier today when I went looking for it on my comp and couldn't find it.  Thank heavens for randomly gmailing stuff to myself.  So I sat and rounded it out.

Title: Harry Potter and Bella Swan: A Conversation
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[moonlitflame]

I'll admit... that is what I found so disturbing about BD. It was "too perfect". Her reaction was just as it would be. So willing to give it all up for him.

So despite the cheekiness... I could totally appreciate this piece. ;)

[tiemeinbows]

Yeah, that was just the beginning of what I found wrong with BD. Sigh.

It's not really too cheeky. Less so than I expected, really. You haven't read Harry Potter, so it'd be hard for you to see why he's so adamant about his position, why it's so very important to him. And you'd miss smaller bits like the reference to the stag for example...

I don't think I did Bella justice... she's really difficult to write. Harry's like buttah, though. Anyhow, thanks for reading my silliness. haha

[muffinkath7]

Loved it. Very cute. Plus, the fact that I think Bella is a moron made me like it even more.

[tiemeinbows]

Heehee thank you. I didn't mind Bella at first but at some point she just stopped being a person. And that wasn't because she turned into a vampire.