I come bearing fic...

[tiemeinbows]

Title: At Last
Author: tiemeinbows
Rating: PG-13/Teen
Pairing: Ron/Hermione
Word Count: 5135 words
Disclaimer: They're all JKR's.
Summary: In the aftermath of the final battle, Ron and Hermione finally manage to slip away, and find a moment for themselves.
Warning: Deathly Hallows spoilers.  Absolutely.
Note: This is unbeta'd and full of tiny canon infractions.  But

Comments

[joianoel]

I adored this. Your POV was great, the inner monologue was very well done, and the emotions you conveyed were so sweet!!

[tiemeinbows]

Thank you, Joia! I've really resisted venturing into HP fic, because I was always afraid I'd go glorifying Ron in some ridiculous, unrealistic way, and I know there'll probably be a dozen stories exactly like this that'll pop up soon enough, but I'm glad you liked it anyhow. :)

[joianoel]

I loved it! I like how you seemed to pick up beautifully on his mood after the battle. Also, you really got that whole scene with the horcrux mocking him about Harry & Hermione. You totally crawled inside his head here and made his vulnerabilities and strengths very easy to relate to. Well done!

[fasttalkingdame]

WOW! This was amazing. I really loved how you got into each character's weaknesses, as well as what they like so much about each other. Your characterization was just perfect. And it was just so... sweet! I've read a lot of similar fics in recent weeks (Ron & Hermione talk post-battle), but I've gotta say this is maybe my favorite so far. You should write more Ron/Hermione, seriously! Maybe you could write about when they go to Australia... pretty please? :)

[tiemeinbows]

Thank you so much! I didn't know if anyone would bother reading it, since like you said, there's already a bunch of these floating around. I really don't know if I'll write more, though... I don't know the HP 'verse well enough... just Ron and Hermione! LOL

[fasttalkingdame]

I got ya... well, all the same, very nice job!

[justvisiting]

This was really great, good job!

[tiemeinbows]

Thank you! Thanks for reading. :)

[xennai]

Ooooh! I love this so much! How could you think that we all wouldn't love it?
I especially loved these two lines:
“Who d’you think’s been driving me crazy for the past seven years? Because it wasn’t Harry, I can promise you that.”

and

“You even breathe more intelligently than anyone I know.”

You've captured them both so well. It was lovely! Bravo!

[tiemeinbows]

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

[sally80_3]

Found this on Checkmated. This is one of the best DH fics i've read so far its so beautiful. You have got the characters points of view so well. I love it!

[tiemeinbows]

Oh my gosh, thank you! That's very sweet of you to say. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

[tiemeinbows]

I forgot... how could you have found this on Checkmated? It's not there?

[sally80_3]

Hi you replied to my post about your story not being on Checkmated. It isn't on their story list. But someone who liked it posted a link(to your journal) on their forums to your story on there. Thats how i found it.