NCIS fic: "A Close Shave" - R [Tony/Ziva]

[tielan]

TITLE: A Close Shave
SUMMARY: The razor strokes Tony's throat like a lover; it could kill him, but right now, it's mostly turning him on.
RATING: R for...honestly, this could probably make PG-13.
CATEGORY: romance, fluff
DISCLAIMER: CBS and Belisarius Productions owns NCIS, not I. I'm just borrowing them for kinks and giggles.
NOTES: Next

Comments

[kristen999]

GUH! Wonderful balance of sensuality and sensory imagery. Really loved how Ziva was intent on her task and not Tony and how his surrender of control and the symbol of the razor as a weapon was a huge turn-on. Great voice and a pleasant picture :D

[tielan]

Hee! Thank you!

Ziva and Tony fit perfectly into my preferred D/s relationship dynamic: he'd cede control to her and she'd enjoy making him beg. No need to be the alpha male, he's happy to let her be alpha female in bed... :D

[wojelah]

I could read you writing this pairing for ever and ever and ever. Granted, this is true of pretty much everything you write.

[tielan]

*smooches* Glad you enjoyed it!

I do enjoy writing them, even if my style probably isn't going to be so popular. I think most people like the happy/fluffy stories more - D/s isn't quite their cup of tea...

[anjali_organna]

Guh, hot and totally in character and guh again. Knives and Ziva. What more could a girl want?? Lovely work as always!

[tielan]

Ziva's good with knives. Really really good. And Tony enjoys living on the edge. :D

[sara_f_black]

Great story! I love the allusion to Sweeney Todd (The title is one too, right? I remember Sweeney saying "the closest I ever gave" in his song with the Judge), and the sensuality of Ziva and the razor.

Great fic!

[tielan]

Actually, the title wasn't intended to be an allusion to Sweeney Todd - I believe I was thinking of Wallace and Gromit (of all things). :D

Thank you!

[alidiabin]

I like ... very much.

[tielan]

Thanks for letting me know. :)