Comments | tielan: fic: A Kingdom, Broken - Part 5/5

tielan

fic: A Kingdom, Broken - Part 5/5 - PG-13 [John/Teyla] COMPLETED!

Jun 19, 2009 23:49

Oh, frabjous day! After six months, mad rewrites, a serious hiatus, and a lot of cursing (mostly of John, who insisted on dawdling), it is finished!

TITLE: A Kingdom, Broken - Part Five
SUMMARY: Their goal was always to defeat the Wraith - or, at least, to find a way by which Pegasus could live without the shadow of the Wraith over them. But there ( Read more... )

pairing: john/teyla, sga, fic

Comments 17

beadattitude June 19 2009, 20:32:58 UTC

I ATE THIS UP. So good. Such a wonderful story, and lovely to see John growing in learning how to express his feelings. Thank you.

tielan June 20 2009, 13:14:31 UTC

I wanted to move John on a little. :)

Thanks for leaving feedback!

purple_cube June 19 2009, 21:34:27 UTC

Lovely ending to a great series, with a fantastic team scene. Thanks :)

tielan June 20 2009, 13:15:22 UTC

Glad you read and enjoyed it! It would be lovely to read some stuff by you again, although I suspect you've moved on.

great read sunichan June 19 2009, 22:54:33 UTC

in the past i havent been too big on fan fic but your story was excellent. extremely well written and structured in a way that made it feel like something was unveiling for us a little at a time. everything the characters did and said fit with their personalities and was believable- so much so that you really do feel like you're in their head.

i always wondered how the show's writers could have pulled off a teyla/john thing and get kanaan out of the picture so soon after their son was born (without making teyla seem flaky or out of character). too bad they didn't have you to work with them!

Re: great read tielan June 20 2009, 13:17:49 UTC

I'm glad you enjoyed it - especially if fanfic isn't your usual thing!

The way I see Teyla/Kanaan is that they're Athosian, from Pegasus. Their relationship wouldn't have to be "Earth Standard" ie. forever and ever love - it could be 'for the time being' or 'until we decide otherwise'. Earth morality (and it's restrictions) need not apply unless people are too hidebound to contemplate anything else.

So yeah, not difficult to do with a bit of thinking-outside-the-Stargate-Atlantis box.

chyti June 21 2009, 08:07:56 UTC

Life has been so busy, but if you can take the time to write such wonderful stories I can at least compliment you on them.

As always I loved it especially your handling of Kanaan and Torren. I never imagine Teyla having a forever love with anyone other than John, Kanaan was a will placed diversion for her and he served his purpose to light the fire under his arse.

lucy anonymous June 24 2009, 08:02:55 UTC

I lost my J/T but I am slowly getting it back with all these WONDERFUL J/T Fics.

Thank you so very much