Comments | tielan: fic: All The King's Men

tielan

fic: All The King's Men - PG-13 [John, team]

Jan 09, 2009 19:05

TITLE: All The King's Men
SUMMARY: Sanity is a fine line between the scars of the past and the belief in a hopeful future. But after a long captivity, John may no longer be capable of the balancing act.
CATEGORY: gen, hurt/comfort, team
RATING: PG-13
DISCLAIMER: Not mine, making no money, please don't sue.
WARNINGS: a lot of Very Bad Things are ( Read more... )

show: sga, fic, fic type: team, genre: gen, characters: john sheppard

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tielan January 13 2009, 18:20:23 UTC

Thank you for you lovely feedback! The story was hell to write, so it's great to know that it's liked.

kristen999 January 9 2009, 13:05:49 UTC

I'm about to go to work, but am very excited to have this. The bad news is I may or may not have internet service for a few days b/c the cable company will be working on the lines...such bad timing.

I'm making a copy just in case, for all I know I won't lose service. Rest assured as soon as I can I'll read and respond!

Can't wait to read when I get home.

therisingmoon January 9 2009, 16:46:30 UTC

ahh, that was wonderful.

tielan January 13 2009, 18:20:37 UTC

Thanks. :)

incredible... anonymous January 9 2009, 16:47:05 UTC

I found I was expecting to read the horrid details of the whumping but then it was the end and I didn't miss them. You gave us the most important parts of what happened to John in these incredibly amazing glimpses and reactions.

LOVE LOVE LOVE the Rodney and John shooting range scene.

Wonderfully done with Teyla and Ronon handling Richard.

*sob* the closet sleeping.

*sniff and grin* sleeping with Torren.

Amazing the fight/test with Amelia (so glad you included her).

Deliciously written, practically perfect in every way.

Tracy_TheEverPresentNaggingOne

Re: incredible... tielan January 14 2009, 19:37:55 UTC

Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it!

Season Five has been disappointing for me in many ways, and the fic I've been seeing hasn't really been measuring up in the inclusion of Teyla and Ronon, so it's good to know that this kind of story still appeals to people!

mtee January 9 2009, 17:44:48 UTC

I really liked this. I love the term survivor -- so very true. Too bad Ronon and Teyla were the only ones that understood.

This was very enjoyable -- even with Keller (sorry, just can't stand the whole relationship thing - at least I could envision her as a domineering girlfriend ;).

Very gripping without having action - that's hard to do.
Thanks.

tielan January 14 2009, 19:41:05 UTC

Thanks for commenting!

I think the thing about Teyla and Ronon is that they've seen and done so much more than TPTB or fandom gives them credit for, and life in Pegasus has given them a vastly different perspective to that of the expedition.

I'm glad you enjoyed it.