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[tideroll72491]

writing a song...it's a lot harder than it seems....it sounds pretty cool though, kinda soft rock feel to it, not hard at all, more like a Train feel, don't know if you guys have ever heard of train, they used to be my favorite band, but i don't really listen to them anymore. anyways, i've got one verse and a chorus written in the words, so i'll

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not bad, not bad at all

[funny_fat_kid]

ur first attempt...pretty good in my opinion. i could never make up words, lol. just chords. this is why ill never be a songwriter. pretty good idea for a song. ill be sure to rip it off as mine one day, lol jk. i give it 3.5 stars (out of 5). thats all.

nice

[shrimp_puff]

your song is pretty... i like it! ***** out of *****
btw, this is scottie, got a live journal thingy.
peace out dawg! (not really, just bye.)

[alex__the_great]

instead of just strumming id make a riff out of the progression. just make it flow and youll be fine. work on your syllables. you should have the same amount on a line so that it sounds right and flows. just dont give up. the only part i found that at was the chorus.

[alex__the_great]

4 out of five.