Day One

[neshel]

Title: Day One
Paring: Mohinder/Sylar
Rating: PG-13
Spoilers: Season 1
Warnings: Angst
Word Count: 1369
Summary: Mohinder discovers the truth, and the world is no longer the same place.

Notes: This is a songfic to Not As We by Alanis Morissette (from her newest album, Flavours of Entanglement). It's a gorgeous song, and as I was listening to

Comments

[aurilly]

What a gorgeous story!

Here there be monsters.
This was such a powerful line. Actually, all the last lines before the bolded parts were powerful. Monsters everywhere. They should use that as a tagline for Villains.

Ingredients he’d nearly thrown out when he’d come across them, unsure as to why his father would ever have purchased them in the first place. Now he was grateful.
This is neat. I've always seen it that Mohinder bought them sometime after finding out the truth, but the idea that the stuff was already in the house is a great idea.

Wonderful fic!

[neshel]

Thank you so much!

Heh, I shamelessly stole that line from PotC... I admit it. Although they shamelessly stole it from somewhere else I'm sure, so it's all good.

I'm really glad those last lines had power for you though, they were sort of unintentionally intended to. If that makes any sense. I doubt it.

This is neat. I've always seen it that Mohinder bought them sometime after finding out the truth, but the idea that the stuff was already in the house is a great idea.
I've seen it both ways. This seems more likely to me though, both that Chandra might have had some sketchy stuff lying around, and that Mohinder wouldn't have had time to buy anything. Definitely not with Sylar looking over his shoulder the whole time.

[ladywilde80]

Why are you so awesome?

Seriously, I think I said this earlier but I ADORE the song you chose and the way you interwove it into the piece itself is just stunning and adds so much to each section.

Really, this is so beautiful. I am so in awe of you AND your talent.

*hugs*

[neshel]

I just am. =P

*hugs back*

Thank you luv.

[bonniesrg]

Beautiful fic...Momo's inner turmoil of his connection to Sylar is wonderful. And how he breaks slightly on realizing the truth, but still goes through with it even when he doubts that Sylar lied about everything.

[neshel]

Thank you!

[poemwithnorhyme]

OMG YOU'RE WRITING AGAIN! *sooo happy* Anyways, onto fic!

I just loved this! It was such a beautiful way to look into Mohinder's mind, discover why he did what he did, how he felt as he did it, and after the events in the Season One Finale. Poor Mohinder, time to start again my ass. lol

I'm so glad you're writing again! Because whatever you write is always so dang good. You're so friggin' talented! *squishes in pure love*

[neshel]

Heee! Yes I am writing again, sort of. I'm determined that my field work over the next few days is going to see at least the completion of my wip pwp, if not major progress on Understanding, but... we'll see. The muse, she is fickle. (Which is really just my way of saying my head's still a little messed up.)

I'm so glad you enjoyed this. =) And you're making me blush again! I'd tell you to stop it, but I honestly love it sooo... *squee*

[catoasapun]

Oh, this is beautiful! So lyrical and enthralling.

There were so many perfect lines here, and I felt all of Mohinder's emotion right along with him because you presented it so vividly. This line, however, jumped out at me and just awed me:
If there is some force for good in this world, surely it would want such a vile man to die. It’s his fate, his karma, but Mohinder wishes he weren’t the one to bring it about.

Thank you for sharing! ^_^

[neshel]

I'm really glad the emotion came across, because that's what this was for me, really, an outpouring of emotion.

Thank you for reading and commenting!