Understanding [6/?]

[neshel]

Title: Understanding [6/?] - Conversation
Rating: R

Pairing/Characters: Mohinder/Sylar, Ensemble

Spoilers: MASSIVE SPOILERS - Seasons 1 and 2
Warnings: Just some language this time.

This Time: Planning ensues, intense discussions are afoot.

A/N: First, if I scared anyone off with the OC character I introduced in Part 4, I just wanted to

Comments

[clarkangel]

Most awesome. I loved Sylar confronting everyone and Mohinder's and Sylar's reactions to each other and all of it. Perfection!

[neshel]

Thank you!

[poemwithnorhyme]

Ohh, YAY! *excited*

Edits:

Claire is great in this one, you don't have to worry about characterization, you've got her down even if she's a 'background character' ^_^ I like the thought of her and Mohinder confronting each other...

And WOAH, I didn't NOT expect Sylar's appearance! Sweet!

"On the one hand, Sylar refused to take orders from anyone; especially a powerless, normal human. On the other hand, seeing Mohinder like this made something inside of Sylar purr." <--Don't know why, this just gave me the best image...

Mmm..Sylar toying with Mohinder with his telekinesis while having an important meeting, how sexy. XD

I love the ending, that just made me happy because it's so perfect. But, I want more! I've gotten spoiled, usually the chapters are longer than this one, >Loved it anyways, you're building up to quite a bit and the potential is mind-boggling. Especially with all of the characters it seems like you're going to bring in. Monica, Bennet, the Haitian, even Claude?! CLAUDE! Maybe, perhaps, who knows, but that'd be

[neshel]

Claire is great in this one, you don't have to worry about characterization, you've got her down even if she's a 'background character'

*phew* Thank you for that, and also for the term "background character".

I like the thought of her and Mohinder confronting each other...

May still write that scene yet, it intrigues me too.

And WOAH, I didn't NOT expect Sylar's appearance! Sweet!

haha! Cool. =)

<--Don't know why, this just gave me the best image...

Ladywilde loved it too. So do I, but I wrote it. XD

Mmm..Sylar toying with Mohinder with his telekinesis while having an important meeting, how sexy. XD

How could he possibly resist?!

I love the ending, that just made me happy because it's so perfect.

The ending of the confrontation or the ending of the chapter?

But, I want more! I've gotten spoiled, usually the chapters are longer than this one, >... )

[neshel]

ah, you edited again!

Especially with all of the characters it seems like you're going to bring in. Monica, Bennet, the Haitian, even Claude?! CLAUDE! Maybe, perhaps, who knows, but that'd be awesome.

Haha, there are certainly a lot more that will be in at least briefly. Claude in particular I hope to work in, but that's still a little up in the air at the moment.

Haha, I'm a big new Doctor Who fan, so I have much Christopher Eccleston love and also much Claude love. If can manage it he will show up eventually.

[levitatethis]

I know what it's like to struggle with a fic (or chapter in this case) where nothing seems to work. But I have to say that I think you've done a great job with this chapter

[neshel]

Thank you so much!

Juggling all three focuses (Mylar/Company/Virus) can be frustrating for me, especially in this chapter. So it's very nice to hear that I'm doing a good job of it. ^_^

I love that you have Mohinder's willingness to put himself at risk for the right thing (where he could die) be something that turns Sylar on.
Haha, oh you know it is! I think especially because Mohinder knows exactly how dangerous it is too. His actions could be viewed as absolutely idiotic, but then he's also smart enough to know that, for the moment at least, Sylar isn't going to er... seriously harm him. Except that Sylar also knows that Mohinder's still terrified of him, hehe.

God I love Mylar, so amazingly complicated. ^_^

Oh and yes, it definitely all comes down to the intellectual connection. That's how it started and, really, is the only reason this messed up couple ever has the slightest chance of longevity. Physical attraction is much easier to brush aside in the long term.

Thanks again!

[ladywilde80]

Oh yay! You posted your next chpt.

Wow *rereads* I love this story. I love it so very much. It is exactly what I have been craving lately - a nice, long - plot driven, oh so angsty Mylar fic. There are so few around lately so if you didn't know already you know now. This has made me happier then I can say. I should be thanking you for having the honor to read and offer what little constructive criticism I can provide. You are just brilliant! I adore you and your writing.

Seriously, I hope you are stuck on Mylar for a good long while because this community definitely needs more writers like you.

We have so many fantastic ones and you are among are very best. I love it AND I loved this chpt. God, Sylar - the way you write him just makes me so happy with glee. He is so perfect in this chapter. I love it - putting the moves on Mohinder with his telekenis. Gah ~ so wonderful. I love all the characters - you do an amazing job with each and everyone.

So yeah. You win. This was amazing as always. <3 <3 <3

[neshel]

*grins*

Oh, I have a feeling I'll be stuck on Mylar for a good long while to come. ^_^

*adores you right back*

[amandasaitou]

Yay, I'm happy to find this story here (I've read all previous five chapters in ffnet, sorry for not seeing it here earlier!)... I think everything is getting better and better in this story, Sylar is behaving so composed (which might mean something not good is on the way), and Mohinder, so lost! But what's been intriguing me greatly is this empath from the future, the questions about her were reasonable...why she didn't kill Sylar, why she didn't talk to Peter instead, and why she took so long in the future to come?? I think there's much more to her than meets the eye...
Hope you can update soon!

[neshel]

Thank you so much! I'm so glad to have you so intrigued. ^_^ I certainly have answers to all those questions but, hehe, ya they're a big secret.

Oh, and icon LOVE. Seriously giggling my ass off over here.