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tia198

E is for Endings

Mar 07, 2010 06:56

Title: E is for Endings.
Characters: Sarah, Ryan, Malcolm Davis(OC), Sam West(OC).
Pairings: Sarah/Ryan
Rating: PG-13
A/N: This is a flashback to why Ryan and Sarah broke up. Thank you to the wonderful fredbassett, fififolle and rodlox for being my amazing beta readers (yes I have 3 now some people call it greedy, I call it smart *g* ), and thank ( Read more... )

sam west, primeval fic, tom ryan, malcolm davis, season 3, sarah page

Comments 29

bella_farfalla March 8 2010, 18:40:48 UTC

*sniffs* that's such a terrible thing to go through. Brilliantly handled.

tia198 March 8 2010, 19:00:45 UTC

Thank you, it took about 5 re-writes before I even thought it was worthy of being sent to my betas, thanks for commenting :)

fredbassett March 8 2010, 19:01:15 UTC

Poor Sarah, and poor Ryan.

I loved Sam in this :)

Great chapter.

tia198 March 8 2010, 19:10:04 UTC

*huggles Sarah and Ryan* see I feel about giving them this history but it had to be done. I channel teenage Sam better than I do adult Sam, I think it has something to do with me being on the same level of maturity (at least that's what I've been told!) thanks for commenting :)

fififolle March 8 2010, 19:16:22 UTC

Oh man, this is so heart-breaking. First off, I can't believe Sam called him when he was about to propose! LOL. And how could Sarah do that to Ryan???? I'm with Sam, grrrr :)
Great fic!

We need one letter every day! *nods*

tia198 March 8 2010, 19:23:09 UTC

I can't believe Sam called him when he was about to propose!

She really wasn't happy with the idea! Sarah's reasons will be explained soon ;)

We need one letter every day! *nods*

LOL - that is exactly what Fred wanted! As tempting as it is to do that means
1) everyone is going to get sick of the pairing really quickly

2) The series be over really quickly.

I offered Fred a comprise of two fics a week, hope you accept it too!

Thanks for commenting, especially since you already know what happens :)

fififolle March 8 2010, 19:53:42 UTC

Well, you know the hound is always right :D But twice a week is probably a very good spacing for the community as a whole :)

tia198 March 8 2010, 19:57:06 UTC

If it makes you feel better I'm dying to post L just so people don't hate Sarah too much :)

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telperion_15 March 8 2010, 19:37:31 UTC

Awwwwww, that's really heartbreaking!

Although if Ryan thought they were at the point of marriage while Sarah thought they were just having fun, then maybe it's for the best...

tia198 March 8 2010, 19:45:10 UTC

It's just a defense mechanism - I'm dying to post my fic for L up because it explains Sarah's motives....must...resist, thanks for commenting :)