[FIC] You and Me - Chapter III

[thylaslain]

You and Me

Overall rating: R - NC-17

Summary: Uchiha Sasuke has returned to Konohagakure. He's changed of course. But so has everything else...
Chapter 3/?
SPOILERS: Up to current in Anime (i.e. Episode 135).
Pairing: Uchiha Sasuke x Uzumaki Naruto :: Others may be mentioned
Chapter Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: Naruto and all related

Comments

[kirikou_yuki]

YAYNESS!
And update!
Joy ^^
I can't wait to see what Naru-chan will say to Sasu-chan ><

And I see you joined our little group, meck, Erokage-sama just left me in charge for a week.
I'm already cluttering the place with forum games X_x

[thylaslain]

n_n ooh! GAMES!
I'm nearly finished with chapter 4. in fact, i finished chapter 3 ages ago. just couldn't be bothered to update. lol.

[kirikou_yuki]

Yesh, games ^^
And new members X_x

And pwease update?
*puppydog/chibi eyes combination of death by cuteness* pweaaaaaaaaaaaase?

[thylaslain]

*closes eyes*
LALALALALALALA I CAN'T HEAR OR SEEEEE YOU!!!!!!
:P

Owned.

[yonde]

How does it feel to have me hooked on your fic updates? <.<;;;

Re: Owned.

[thylaslain]

pretty darn good actually.
n_n I'm really glad you like it so far. At least, I HOPE you like it so far...O___o

anyways, like i said before, chappy 4 is nearly done. :D

[questofdreams]

wow...I am REALLY enjoying this ^_^ Your updates are short (poo, XD) but they're really good. The only thing that annoys me (I'm sorry, but I have this peeve about all fics) is the random japanese thrown in here and there. Honestly, I don't think it's necessary, save for the honorifics. Words like "gomen" and "daijoubu ka" are unnecessary b/c not everyone understands them, even though they watch the anime or read the manga. And honestly, it's a little cheesy ^^; The honorifics are the only parts that can be considered necessary when they point out certain aspects of a character's personality.

Sorry for rambling ^__^ But honestly, I really like this. And yay! The confrontation!!! Looking forward to the next update.

[thylaslain]

It's ok.
I dunno, for some reason, whenever I write in random japanese, I can't picture it any other way. lol.
Gome--I mean, sorry.
lol.
I'll provide a glossary?
That way...you know. No one will miss out on anything.
And at least my fic will provide for educational purposes.

anyway, I like cheesy. lol. in case you haven't noticed.
And don't tell me to stop using Dobe! TT__TT it's a strictly SasukexNaruto thing. really!

x_x
:D But danke for the criticism. I really appreciate it!

[questofdreams]

lol...it's ok ^_^ I think a glossary would help. And as much as I think "dobe" is cute, Sasuke only ever used it like...what? two or three times way way way in the beginning of the series? So...I've never understood why so many writers use it so often b/c Sasuke certainly didn't. If anything, "usurakontachi" is something he calls Naruto a LOT more XD.

And yeah, cheesy is good sometimes especially when it's fluffy and cute sasukexnaruto stuff, hehehe...

[thylaslain]

i know i use it because it's cute. lol. I dunno bout others. prolly for the same reason.
I rarely use Usurakontachi coz it's so bloody long and i'm so bloody lazy. lol.

[ai_no_kisu]

im hooked too!! i was looking at the 2nd chapter and willing for you to update! and you did! behold my power!! wahahaha! <3
but seriously, i can't wait for the next chapter--sasuke and naruto's reaction to each other!

[thylaslain]

I'm very glad you like it!!!
Dude.
See if you can will me a Johnny Depp.
I'll write you a thousand fanfics...I'll be your fanfic slave!
I'll write SMUT GALORE (if you like that sorta thing. I know i do! *wink* *wink* *nude* *nude*...er...I meant, *nudge* *nudge* ^^; *sigh* smut...)
Oh oh, while you're at it, try willing me some Jude Law.

NO
no.
Don't.
Instead, Will me some Serious SasuxNaru moments in the anime + manga. YEAH!
I'm sure EVERYONE who reads this fic'll agree with me. *hehehehe*

[sugercat]

*just got me hook on your fic* Cool ficcy!!

[thylaslain]

:Grins: Why thanks ya.
:D

[sugercat]

your welcome =^~=