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Prison Break: These small hours (1/1)

May 24, 2009 00:10

Title: These small hours (1/1)
Author: Thyboz
Characters: Michael, Lincoln, mentions of Sara and LJ (Prison Break)
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: as they made sure to remind us with the way they ended the show, characters belong to Fox and TPTB.
Spoilers: up to the end of season 4.
Summary: Set post series. AU as it completely ignores the last scene of the ( Read more... )

prison break, fanfiction, au, michael, these small hours, lincoln

Comments 29

torogi May 23 2009, 22:50:07 UTC

This was incredibly satisfying. It's how I've envisioned them - Linc, Michael, Sara... life by the beach. Them just enjoying life. I really like how you weaved in their past, and how they're constantly dealing with it -- I feel like that's how things should've ended. Thanks for this :)

thyboz May 24 2009, 13:28:46 UTC

I feel like that's how things should've ended.
I'm glad you feel that way about this story! After all, isn't the fact that they stay haunted by their past bittersweet enough? *sighs*
Thank you for your comment :) I'm glad you enjoyed this!

marap May 23 2009, 23:28:08 UTC

This is lovely. ♥ Beautifully written, perfect characterisation. I loved it. I hope you continue to write PB fic!

thyboz May 24 2009, 13:34:56 UTC

perfect characterisation
Thank you so much for your comment, that means a lot to me.
I'm not planning on stopping writing for PB quite yet ;) I hope you enjoy the next ones too :)

spunkyar May 24 2009, 01:39:56 UTC

This was sweet and simple. You can really feel that these two are at peace. I love Misa, but it would be great to see a scene like this between the brothers too. :)

thyboz May 24 2009, 13:41:05 UTC

Thank you, glad you liked this! I love Misa too, but I can't deny that I have a soft spot for the brothers :)

anonymous May 24 2009, 02:17:52 UTC

Lovely! Just how I pictured a scene like this between the brothers to be. Hope we get it for real on the show. You captured the moment well!

Thanks for sharing.

thyboz May 24 2009, 13:54:37 UTC

Thank you so much, I'm glad you think that! I wouldn't mind seeing something like that too, they really deserve moments of peace...

far1003 May 24 2009, 02:23:15 UTC

That was a lovely piece of writing. I enjoyed the blueberry pancakes note and the isea that it has all gone full circle.

Thanks for the cheer up.

thyboz May 24 2009, 14:37:02 UTC

Thank you for your nice comment :) Glad you enjoyed it, and even more if it cheered you up a bit!