Inevitable

Oct 23, 2007 23:35

Title: Bitter Harvest
Flavor: CI
Rating: PG
Count: 411
A/N: This was an experiment with free association, stream of consciousness-type writing, done in 25 minutes and unedited, so be warned. Also mentions the events of In the Wee Small Hours, Blind Spot, Siren Call, The War at Home, Amends, and Smile.

Bitter Harvest )

[character] alex eames, [character] bobby goren, [author] gorengal

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daf9 October 25 2007, 00:34:38 UTC
Nicely, nicely done. I really like your interpretation both of the challenge and of what's been happening between Bobby and Alex. It's very plausible which is not something I say all that often about stories that ship B/A.

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gorengal October 25 2007, 14:10:16 UTC
Thank you. This is pretty much how I see the Bobby/Alex discord (without the sex part, but I guess you never know)...so even though I tried to have each section follow a certain pattern, the thoughts were more along the lines of stream of consciousness. As much as I love a good ship story, I seem to have an aversion to writing it...I was very surprised when that line came out in the first paragraph! I'm doing a story for all_hallows_fic, and with the prompt I was given I think I'll have to write married B/A. You won't believe how I'm struggling with it.

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bast2 October 25 2007, 19:18:46 UTC
Ditto what daf said!

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gorengal October 29 2007, 03:37:56 UTC
Thanks, bast! :)

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gorengal October 29 2007, 03:41:06 UTC
Aww, don't cry! And yay, more fic from you! I'll be looking for it.... :D

Thanks, btw.

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