Shatter

[thundersquall]

Title: Shatter
Pairing: Yesung/Ryeowook
Rating: R
Word count: 7,133
Summary: Jongwoon hates his new half-brother that his father springs on him suddenly, the result of a long-term affair. But he has to battle with his conscience when he falls in love with him.
WARNINGS: Incest, character death

Written for emilycullenx , based on her prompt. I hope this doesn’t let

Comments

[terra_forensis]

OH FUCK. OH FUCK OH FUCK OH FUCK OH FUCK -CRYING SO HARD- THAT ENDING HAD ME SOBBING SO HARD ASDFKIFHAKJ THIS FIC WAS SO PERFECT AND I LOVED IT AND CRYING SO HARD RIGHT NOW FDKLSFJK <33333333333333333

I'LL BE BACK WHEN I'M MORE COHERENT

[terra_forensis]

I'M... I'M TOTALLY BOWING DOWN TO YOUR ABILITIES TO WRITE SITUATIONS SPOT ON. While reading this I was totally feeling like I was right there, and so I was honestly crying at the end. This fic was just... gah, so beautiful <3

[thundersquall]

NO, LIZ, DON'T CRY PLEASE, I'M SORRYYYYYYYYY *WIPES TEARS*

You're so amazing yourself, bb. Thank you so much, I'm really, REALLY happy you liked this. But don't cry! DDDD: *loves on you* ♥

[terra_forensis]

-still weeping-

I CAN'T HELP IT D: THE TEARS WON'T STOP -HUGGLES-

^___^ I was so surprised when I went to Miracle and the first thing I saw was like a fic by you~ Yay~ ♥♥♥ I'll try not to cry anymore now *loves on you too*

[zhenli]

spot. i'm so exhausted right now - but i will come back after some rest and read this (i want to be able to enjoy this awesomeness properly). and then after i have enjoyed it, i will leave an epic long comment, =D

<3 you and your writing always. i know i'll love this even though i haven't read it yet.

(also 7,000+ words? Sheena how do you do it?
& why are you so amazing?)

[thundersquall]

Don't worry about it bb, I'll take this as your comment because it's lovely enough! <33333

But don't say you'll like it before you read it... you really might end up hating it, it's not quite... uh, satisfactory, in my opinion. D:

(I stayed up all night and forced myself to write this, or I'd get lazy and this would never finish. D: Also my fics have a tendency of turning into crazy long monsters 'cause I just go on and on and on. I'm much too wordy, it's not good at all. D: )

*glomps you*

[zhenli]

;__________________________________________________________;
/wails
this omfg, omfg! OMFG! not satisfactory? are you out of your mind?! this was - holy shit. i can't even think straight. this was so beautiful. the way you spun each word and interaction; and it was paced so nicely. and then ryeowook. i can just see this ryeowook in my brain and, yesung!. ugh, you kill me. seriously. why are you so fucking amazing?!

(you are not to wordy! it's perfect so descriptive and - yes!)

/cuddles
never. stop. writing.

[thundersquall]

sadjkfsakjg OMG YOU ALWAYS MAKE ME SO HAPPY, WHY. *CLINGS*

I'm just - never ever satisfied with my writing. D: Plus I wrote this in one sitting, through the night, and I was kind of half dead at the end, so I was like ugh I could have made it better but I'm just happy you liked this. *hugs*

I won't stop writing, I love to write! (And as long as YeWook continue being sexy and married I'd never stop, LOL.)

[thundersquall]

CRYING, WHAT DID I EVER DOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO *CLINGS* I LOVE YOU ANNIE, DON'T HATE ME ♥

[ttangkkoma]

... i wish i had been on longer to have the first spot on a long fic lulz

[thundersquall]

You know me I can't help but stress and sdfkjghkfs this really isn't as good as I'd hoped I would be able to write. D:

Crying, no one seemed to have noted the character death warning. *dies* Should I bold it?

I don't know why I keep writing Ryeowook as a little slut. D: It's such a kink for me. I don't think I can ever not think of him as a slut anymore. xD

*dies* I was hoping people would think the mom is a big bitch and sympathise with poor Wookie! You terrible woman, how could you NOT be on YeWook's side. =P

DUDE, IF THE ONLY REASON WHY YOU LIKED THE FIC IS 'CAUSE OF THE MOM THEN I THINK I SUCKED BALLS. DDDDDDD: But still... I love you for liking it. *clings*

[coffeebang]

;____; That was depressing...but very well written.

[thundersquall]

I'm sorry. DDDD: But thank you so much for reading! <3333