Fic: Unfinished Business (Dean/Castiel/Jimmy)

[thunder_nari]

Title: Unfinished Business
Author: thunder_nari
Artist: lolryne
Fandom/Genre: Supernatural; AU
Pairing(s): Dean/Castiel/Jimmy, hints at pre-Dean/Lisa
Rating: R
Word Count: ~10 000
Notes: Huge thanks to betahimetsukiko and tawg for the betas. And to lolryne for the art, which I still just can't get over for it's sheer cuteness. lol You definitely picked out a happy moment for them,

Comments

[slartibartfast]

Finally actually posting this comment.

I could really just sum it up with 'I love it' but that would be a boring comment and would not do the fic justice. It's written so vividly and the pace is perfect, drawing it out and making the ending all the more poignant. Actually I think this might be one of the best things you've ever written since it's such a neat package, a beautiful story with a wonderful twist and so much emotion.

You made me cry, by the way. That ending was so bittersweet with Castiel letting go. And Jimmy! Sneaky little reaper's assistant. I love that you used Tessa because Tessa is awesome. Dean broke my heart and through it all you had all of their characterisations down brilliantly.

I love it. ♥

[thunder_nari]

Thank you for FINALLY commenting. ;)

I li^e to make other people cry. <3

[mozzarellaroses]

I might cry. You know, just very sensibly.

THIS WAS SO BEAUTIFUL. Okay.
Okay.

I didn't hate the ending but UURRRGGHHH CASSS D8
This was too amazing for words. Amazing idea, and the execution was gold. So much love~

[thunder_nari]

Thank you so much! <3<3<3

[off_the_post18]

Even though this fic wrenched my heart out, I think I have found my OT3 in this fandom. You write the tragic very well m'dear. Life doesn't always end in a HEA, thank you for being bold enough to go that route (in such a well-written and gorgeous way.)

[thunder_nari]

I always feel silly when I try to write HEA. :P Then stuff like this happens instead. But I'm glad it worked for you! Thanks for the comment. :)

[rumi_nyo]

Oooh that was so sad. T_T But maybe there is some peace for them finally. Well done. ^_^

[thunder_nari]

Definitely a bit of peace. <3 Thank you!

[rocketgirl2]

Okay so this is beautiful and sad and such a fantastic piece. ♥ I feel like I should say something more but it would probably just be incoherent squee, so.

[thunder_nari]

Glad you liked it so much! Thanks! :)