Absolutely marvelous, Thev. Tender and funny and sexy, with a little bit of inner angst thrown in for good measure. You've done such an amazing job getting into the mind of Draco and your Ron is perfect. But then again, he always is. ;)
I feel honoured to have gotten previews of this before it went live, and while I read those voraciously, it's nothing compared to the way my eyes were *glued* to the screen for the whole story.
Oh sweetie, I'm so glad that you liked it!! Being in Draco's head for that long was quite an experience, but rather a lot of fun, too. I was so glad to have your input along the way; your enthusiasm and comments gave me a lot of inspirational 'juice' for the words to keep flowing.
Yay! And I have an unhealthy obsession with Scorpius as the tattoo now... must not overdo that and use it other fics. Really. ;) The premise is just so fun!!
Darlin, you know I always like your stories. This one, however, I think is a real piece of class work. There are so many things I think are just genius about it
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Hey love! You're so very kind to comment again after the in-depth comments you gave while beta'ing... many, many thanks. I'm thrilled, honestly, that you feel that I got the 'stroppy bottom' part believable. I don't want to go on and on about it, but I'm just so grateful that his personality was strong in this and that his preferences in the bedroom are just that- and his character and persona everywhere else are, of course, just as much a part of him, but not at all submissive.
I'm especially pleased that you felt that pivotal moment in Ron's office, and that it wasn't overwritten.
So much gratitude to you for your insights! You gave me the guidance to polish this, truly. XOXOX
That was beautiful. You captured Ron and Draco both wonderfully and made the relationship not only believable, but utterly amazing as well. I loved it from start to finish, the only thing to dislike is that it is over!
Oh, thank you very much for your kind words! I'm so pleased that you enjoyed it; it was a difficult one to bring to a close, but that seemed an appropriate point. I'm gratified that you felt their relationship was believable; these two as a pairing have fascinated me literally for years, so I'm glad that they worked for you in this story.
A lovely fic, hon -- and I was delighted by the rope bondage. Their romance is on the whole straightforward, really, but enough complication with others to keep things on edge.
::grins:: That last scene with Scorpius was one when I literally blushed while writing it, thinking, "I can't believe I'm writing this!!" But I loved it, too. *g*
Yes, the romance is pretty straightforward, with the kink element to make it perhaps not quite as done to death, at least I hoped so. So glad you enjoyed the shibari, and the fic as a whole. I appreciate your taking the time to read it!
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Absolutely marvelous, Thev. Tender and funny and sexy, with a little bit of inner angst thrown in for good measure. You've done such an amazing job getting into the mind of Draco and your Ron is perfect. But then again, he always is. ;)
I feel honoured to have gotten previews of this before it went live, and while I read those voraciously, it's nothing compared to the way my eyes were *glued* to the screen for the whole story.
It's all so...it's so fucking *lush*.
Nnngh. :passes out:
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Yay! And I have an unhealthy obsession with Scorpius as the tattoo now... must not overdo that and use it other fics. Really. ;) The premise is just so fun!!
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I'm especially pleased that you felt that pivotal moment in Ron's office, and that it wasn't overwritten.
So much gratitude to you for your insights! You gave me the guidance to polish this, truly. XOXOX
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A lovely fic, hon -- and I was delighted by the rope bondage. Their romance is on the whole straightforward, really, but enough complication with others to keep things on edge.
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Yes, the romance is pretty straightforward, with the kink element to make it perhaps not quite as done to death, at least I hoped so. So glad you enjoyed the shibari, and the fic as a whole. I appreciate your taking the time to read it!
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