Comments | threthiel9: In which she does something for the first time...

threthiel9

In which she does something for the first time...

May 21, 2007 18:36

Title: Special
Rating: PG, maybe barely 13 just to be safe.
Characters: Gabriel/Sylar (not the pairing), OC, mention of Mama Gray.
Spoilers: AU; Gabe has an older brother. Spoilers up to 'The Hard Part'.
Disclaimer: If I owned any of it, I'd be doing a lot more "interesting" things than writing fic.
Summary: He was everything a parent could ( Read more... )

fic: sylar/gabriel gray, my fic, fic: gen, heroes, flist: jadeblood

Comments 6

wild_force71 May 22 2007, 07:02:33 UTC

I like! It makes me feel sorry for Sylar, which is weird in a good way. Write more!

threthiel9 May 22 2007, 19:34:53 UTC

Hmm, dunno if I've actually got any more for this. Possibly, but... Well, let's say Sylar's life is about to get a little more complicated.

cazrolime May 22 2007, 11:20:19 UTC

*Applauds you* That was really good (especially for a first fic; Lord knows my first stories were dire). I like your writing style-- not forced at all, but very flowing and easy to read.

yemaya29982 May 22 2007, 15:34:23 UTC

i really like this, very good....i cant wait to see where u go with it thankys

threthiel9 May 22 2007, 19:31:51 UTC

Thanks! Although this was kind of a one-shot deal. I may be able to scrounge up some more for this, but even if that doesn't work, don't worry. I've got other plans for Sylar. ;]

mossymermaid May 28 2007, 23:04:02 UTC

Wow, this was fantastic. I loved how this other character, his brother, really came to live and cast Gabriel's life into shadow.

And the ending, where he hasn't lived up to his potential, was a corker. How very funny! (I shouldn't be laughing) But you made me laugh with Sylar at his brother, it's your writing. I'm blaming that.

This was an easy read, flowed well. I'd love to read more of this if you have it....!