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[threetrackmind]

your hands map out
the rolling foothills
of my
rib cage
the mountains
of my
vertebrae
your teeth
leave trail
markers on my
lip

i want to go
cliff-jumping
from your jawline
land on your chest
and lay a while

onward, brave
young traveler;
i won't give the map
to anyone
but you

Comments

[captainseby]

Awesome. Awesome, awesome stuff.

Do you put music to any of these? You should.

[threetrackmind]

thank you very much!

i've thought about doing that, but usually decide against it. i write lyrics sometimes, though, if i have music to do it for.

[joothemoo]

aw :) I like this very much

[threetrackmind]

thank you

[dearwallflow3r]

wow. cliff jumping off the jawline, that's brilliant. Love the image. I find this is a really great poem.