YAY! more! and, aww, Ray and just... yeah. I am partic. fond of "I don't know where Frannie gets her news" and the whole bit in the top where he's all thinking about offing people and being severely unsettled at the habit and just yeah. Is GOOD.
i like the top section too. he got all fucked off there at the end and kinda scared me. but it's good, i think. fits or something.
(i'm thinking everything i've written so far of ray/ray, like everything, the prawn and everything, can probably fit into this universe. which is cool.)
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i like the top section too. he got all fucked off there at the end and kinda scared me. but it's good, i think. fits or something.
(i'm thinking everything i've written so far of ray/ray, like everything, the prawn and everything, can probably fit into this universe. which is cool.)
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and, yeaaah. it does, it really does fit.
(ooh, that is sneaky. and good. go you, dude.)
also, taking a moment to appreciate how we are all completely have taken over the word "prawn" for immoral purposes. *is proud*
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