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Oct 12, 2007 10:43

ignazwisdom prompted "either Ray at the shooting range," and i've been sitting on this for over a week now because i forgot i wrote it. cough. (also, again, not entirely happy with it. sigh.)

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nos4a2no9 October 13 2007, 02:50:37 UTC

Ooooh, I have a gun kink but this...this is dark shit. That last line sent a shiver up my spine. You give such good damaged Vecchio.

And I think this should demonstrate that your writing is not broken. You just stuck your pen in your waistband and buried your mojo a little deeper. It's still there! Just...undercover. With the mob.

Okay, my ability to craft a convincing analogy is broken. Maybe it's undercover with your muse.

izzybeth October 13 2007, 05:42:34 UTC

You give such good damaged Vecchio

is it bad that i think that's the best feedback ever?

must get back into the writing groove. i miss it.

shihadchick October 13 2007, 06:38:33 UTC

Oooh. This is very- oww. Poor Ray. And that last line is an absolute killer, Iz.

izzybeth October 13 2007, 16:40:56 UTC

<3 thank you, dear.

ignazwisdom October 23 2007, 20:21:39 UTC

Hi! I'm really late in commenting on this, but what an incredible response to that prompt. It gave me chills. You should be VERY happy with it.

izzybeth October 23 2007, 21:43:30 UTC

dude, late comments are excellent because they are pleasant SURPRISES. and thank you so much. CHILLS. awesome. i'm really trying to get back in the writing groove.