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shihadchick December 21 2006, 08:26:46 UTC
And we're hanging out, dripping peanut sauce onto back issues of Ring World, listening to Bob wish that for just one time we could stand inside his shoes, and it's good, you know, it's just *good.* So of course one of us has to fuck it up. This time it's me. I actually asked him why he left Canada. Left Fraser. And I don't know why I did, it just seemed like we were doing pretty well, and neither of us had tried to hit the other yet, and I, in my infinite wisdom, just had to go and change that. Because yeah, he almost popped me one. Like I said, Kowalski's difficult. But please, like I wouldn't have seen that coming. So I pushed his fist aside and he punched the back of the couch, and he just looked like a miserable teenager, all the piss and vinegar knocked right out of him. I wasn't mad at him. I wanted to hit people (mostly Feebs) when I left Benny too.
I have worlds upon worlds of love for this entire paragraph. The magazine detail, the quiet atmospheric bits, the smartness, the "one of us has to fuck it up", the fact that Ray ( ... )

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izzybeth December 21 2006, 10:03:45 UTC
thank you, sweetie. i love this Ray. i love writing this and watching how things are getting easier for him.

the turtle is so cute. i love the turtle. i think Kowalski is more fond of it than he lets on.

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shihadchick December 21 2006, 10:13:02 UTC
you're welcome. and i'm sorry i lose at html. but, yay. i'm glad you're enjoying writing it.

so much turtle love! and i bet he is, yeah.

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