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threesunrises

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Jul 26, 2006 08:15

started its life as this back in february.

( a big one )

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leici July 26 2006, 15:38:09 UTC

Your fiction makes me so happy. SO happy. And the little note graphic is fantastic. How did you do that?

I love your Rays. Both of them. I love Kowalski's tone, I love his attitude. It feels perfect to me. And you already know what a hard on I have for your Vecchio voice.

Basically, you kick ass. All sorts of ass. It makes me glad I have this icon with which to reply to your fiction. Heh.

izzybeth July 26 2006, 21:36:16 UTC

your comments make me SO HAPPY!

note: i found a set of coffee stain brushes specially for this fic. and there's a thumbprint and lots of smudge tool.

i'm so happy you think both my Rays are on. because i worry about this stuff.

your icon is pretty. i love that photo. they're all... mmm. :D

leici July 30 2006, 05:05:19 UTC

Hee. Well, your fiction makes me happy. So we're even. :)

Still, that graphic kicks ASS. The smudging is awesome.

I think they're both absolutely perfect. I'm always happy to see more from you. I love these two.

I know. The two of them are way too hot for their own good.

natlet July 26 2006, 20:00:06 UTC

Aughhhh. I love this. I love this! I love Kowalski being all grudgingly-helpful, I love Vecchio cooking hangover eggs, I love the line about the girly hair things. The little graphic is so cute! I love you. You're fantastic.

izzybeth July 26 2006, 21:40:51 UTC

ok, i'm so doing the happy dance now. i'm so happy you guys are liking this. this bit was the first part of it i came up with ages ago in stream of consciousness form thing and it's way better all finished off.

ahaha, 'grudgingly-helpful,' that's perfect. because he likes Vecchio, he just doesn't want to admit it. i love them. and i love you because your comments are the best. i'm so glad you're liking it. <3.

shihadchick July 27 2006, 09:55:54 UTC

YAY. I love them both in this bit, and I remember the prototypey bits, and I love the 'respectable bedhead' line A WHOLE BUNCH and RayK teasing him a little about the Riv, and just... YAY. much love.

izzybeth July 27 2006, 10:04:36 UTC

i'm trying to stay away from the adjective "experimental" for obvious reasons. :D

yay! yes, it's no longer the Paragraph Of Doom. much better now.

shihadchick July 27 2006, 10:08:14 UTC

I support this endeavour. But yes, it totally worked as is and it sounded right likw that, too.

yeah! see, you totally win. *twirls you*

wow, i totally can't type. sorries.

izzybeth July 27 2006, 10:14:44 UTC

...are you terribly busy? might you care to hop on AIM? because i don't quite know where to go next and i could use someone to bounce ideas off of... (if you're busy, it's cool.)

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