Whoa whoa whoa! That was beautifully handled and so very hot!! The conversations were not the usual, and better for it, the leap perfectly natural, the kisses AMAZING. I love your guileless take-charge Tony, you really excel at him when he is dominant but incredibly tender. Even so Tony is admittedly inexperienced or reluctant in intimacy and spending the night. He just shoots so straight (sorry) and I love it. But Gibbs knows and yes, the boy is staying, ha! They're guys, they're equal, they are frank, as they would be. It expands my concept of them. I like that you've used canon, but disregarded the things that sometimes poison the well. I'm going to have trouble explaining that, because I've done it, written the fic in which their love is kind of anemic and traumatized. Canon poisoning. Maybe we all have to write that fic. But I love the way you make them stronger and smarter and riskier, real people in a real situation. The sex was Grrrrrrrreat! :-)
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Even so Tony is admittedly inexperienced or reluctant in intimacy and spending the night. He just shoots so straight (sorry) and I love it. But Gibbs knows and yes, the boy is staying, ha! They're guys, they're equal, they are frank, as they would be. It expands my concept of them. I like that you've used canon, but disregarded the things that sometimes poison the well. I'm going to have trouble explaining that, because I've done it, written the fic in which their love is kind of anemic and traumatized. Canon poisoning. Maybe we all have to write that fic. But I love the way you make them stronger and smarter and riskier, real people in a real situation. The sex was Grrrrrrrreat! :-)
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