fan fic: Imprint

[three_nails]

Okay, so I've never written a fanfic before, or anything close. I was pretty much just absorbed by Quil/Claire and all the possibilities. "Eclipse" SPOILERS, I guess...kinda. *shrugs*

Comments

[noblealice]

“Claire,” he had said with intensity in his voice. I could only stare at him in shock,

I loved that line. I can just imagine how his eyes smoldered and there were so many unspoken words on his lips.

I also adore this ship. I'm thinking of writing fic too, but it probably wont be half as good. I really enjoyed this story.

There are a few typos though, minor things a simple read-through could catch:

"in the Superman way (not was)"

But it didn't pull me out of this lovely story. Kudos!

[three_nails]

Yaay =D. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I fixed that typo you pointed out. I read it through before posting, but I didn't read it outloud... which is the best way for me to find those things, so I didn't catch it. Oh well.

Please write fic for them =D!

[luminousdesire]

I LOVE it. I loved the whole idea of imprinting, and the fact that Quil imprinted on a 2 year old was hilarious. For a split second it was kind of creepy, until it was explained he would be more like a big brother to her during her younger years. Then it was cute.

Very nice little fic though. You should write more often :o)

[three_nails]

I had to stop reading so I could LOL for a solid minute, at least, when Jake told us about Quil imprinting a 2 YEAR OLD XD. It was just so ironic, Quil was such a cocky guy (he had asked out a Senior's gf) and he ends up with a baby. Loooool. And I loved how Bella was creeped out =D. So yeah, I thought it was hilarious until after I had finished the book, and then I got thinking about how their relationship would be, and I fell in love with the ship =].

Thank you =D. I'd forgotten how much I like writting. It comes kind of easily to me, my teachers were always impressed, so I should practice more. Besides my 2 college essays I wrote this past spring I haven't written anything (even for school) for over a year.

[michili]

Aw, that was sweet, as short as it was. I found you from the lovely Elyssa [anythingbutgrey]. I'm new to the whole LJ thing, and only because of my post-Eclipse Jacob obsessive disorder.

I never really thought about Quil/Claire until now [my mind had been occupied with thoughts of another werewolf...], but it's definitely a relationship that gives me a smile. Very sweet. Friend me? :)

[three_nails]

I'm glad you liked it =D.

Yeah, I've seen you commenting over at Elyssa's journal, I've added you back!

[etzyofi]

This was absolutely beautiful. I loved the Quil imagery and you id such a great job developing their relationship in such a short fic! I really loved it!

You must write more!

[three_nails]

Thank you =D!

I really want to write more, I actually kind of started another fic, but it's so hard to write fic when I have all this schoolwork to do, and I feel really guilty if I write fic instead of my essays that need to be done. *sigh*

[jheanne]

Great imagery and characterization. I love seeing them in different times of her life. Also, how does he know that she's in danger before he saved her from the truck?

I didn’t know how to answer him, it was all so new and different between us still.

I liked that line. Quil's been around almost all her life and yet their relationship is changing as she grows up. I hope when you have the time you write more Quil/Claire. =)

[three_nails]

Thank you =D.

Ha, honestly I don't really know. In my head he is sort of connected to her. And I think he watches out for her a lot.

I hope to write more, too, school is just crazy. Hopefully soon =).

[ladyranee]

Hi again! Just curious if anything is planned with clairequil.

[three_nails]

errr, not really sure. I honestly forgot about it. I'm sure it would be cool if you wanted to go ahead and post. But yeah, not sure.