Waking Dream

Apr 18, 2006 17:14

This is what I get for reading Sophie's World. THIRD ATTEMPT AT A KH FIC, OMG.

Title: Waking Dream (Title=wtf?)
Pairing: Axel x Roxas
Rating: PG.
Warning: EXTREMELY slight AU. No spoilers. Not really much of anything.
Summary: Axel was dreaming (Right? He didn't know)
Notes: THere was a poem in the book Sophie's World I really liked. It's at the ( Read more... )

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yurameki_tenshi April 19 2006, 02:44:02 UTC
Wai~ I loved it! ^^ Heh.

Rolling over in bed, Axel was completely awake as he came face to face with bright dark blue eyes and soft (yes, incredibly soft) golden blond hair.

Ah, what then?

You molest the cute blond next to you, Axel! :O

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thixophobia April 19 2006, 10:22:36 UTC
Heh, I'm glad you liked it ^^

-snort- Too bad I can't write smut D:

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maeda April 19 2006, 03:16:18 UTC
That was so ... pretty! (Sorry, I lose at coming up with good descriptive words, let's just say I liked it and leave it at that, shall we?)

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thixophobia April 19 2006, 10:28:53 UTC
Heh, that's ok, pretty is good ^^ Thankyew!

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thixophobia April 19 2006, 10:34:30 UTC
Yeah, keeping Axel in character was my biggest problem. Usually I don't have too much trouble doing so, but it didn't seem to fit into the story when I wrote it. So I just ended up blaming it on the fact he was dreaming.

Nah, you didn't confuse me, since that was a major problem for me. The quote is really the fault of all this; I read it and then the plot just wouldn't leave me. I wasn't sure if the title made any sense, but I liked how it sounded. Thanks for reading ^^

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ex_riku_rep April 19 2006, 03:43:40 UTC
I really liked the dream/reality link. The descriptions are vivid and really added to the deamlike feel.

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thixophobia April 19 2006, 10:38:42 UTC
I'm glad you liked it! Heh, thanks, the descriptions were one of the things I worked most on.

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neferet10210 April 20 2006, 01:02:10 UTC
x3 Much love to you.

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