hello, sweetheart.

[moveablehistory]

title: hello, sweetheart.
author: moveablehistory
rating: almost porny. ehhh, hard 14a.
characters/pairings: ofc, Sam/Dean.
summary: 1190ish words of a third person observing how much Dean loves Sam. And vice-versa.
note: son-of-a-bitch is used as a generic all-purpose expletive. Just so you know. The book Eleanor Rigby is a reference to the beatles

Comments

[moveablehistory]

I love seeing outside perspectives as well, and what they've got is definitely something that would be noticed.

You're welcome♥

[calicokat]

Ahh, aren't we all voyeur hotel girls at heart ,in this business? Go voyeur hotel girl! This was a very fun idea. ^_^ Headboard thumping rhythmically, indeed... >:B

[moveablehistory]

Yeah, we definitely are. Thanks. ♥

[flipmontigirl]

:)

[moveablehistory]

thank you so, so very much. ♥

[teamane]

I wanted them in the room next to mine too. Eheheh
Nice fic with great visions of those two sexy guys.
:D

[moveablehistory]

Dude, me too.

Thanks. :)

[moveablehistory]

I'm going to totally indulge a little and explain that choice, so skip this if you want, heh. :)

Okay, so, I had her very deliberately Not Notice they were brothers because, for the genpop, incest is obviously still squicky as hell. I wasn't sure how she was going to take it, and she's open-minded but I figure she'd see it as something to hide, clean - so to speak - but still something to hide, something she obviously hates. She's an idealist; she's lonely because she doesn't want to settle even though she figures it's hopeless. :) She's just this washed-out kid, grades too low to get into state school, just wage-slaving till she finds something better.

I figure that she's seeing all the things that we would if we were in that position - what Micheal saw in something wicked.

Thank you♥ - I'm always happy to read one of your comments. :D

[moveablehistory]

Me too - I love it so much when someone asks me about why I did something, 'cause then I get to ramble on about why this happened and why I did that. I'm terribly self-conscious about big long author's notes (esp. at the end of stories, always tends to surprise me when that happens, heh) and I'm always afraid of coming across as pretentious. Or something. *kicks dirt; shuffles*

You're right - Dean and Sam are this huge beacon of this is what it could be like for her, and introducing the incest taboo would break her heart. She's necessarily "don't ask, don't tell" so there's no real reason why she would find out - she's taught herself to not be too observant.

thanks so, so, so much. ♥