hear the whole world turning

[moveablehistory]

title. hear the whole world turning
rating. R
pairing. (pre-) Sam/Dean
notes. For batoutofkansas. 1950 words, with most grateful thanks to belovedsnail.
summary. Sam's cursed. Dean doesn't really mind.

Comments

[offtheceiling]

Oh, I love this. And this part especially:

"I mean- I'm asking for you, Dean, not like I've asked for you to do stuff for me, or give stuff up, or something." Sam waved his hands helplessly: "I just want you."

*hands* Oh, boys! ♥

[moveablehistory]

Oh, thanks. :)) I'm so glad you like it!

[eboniorchid]

Dude. This is lovely. I love your blinks-of-time style. I can never do that properly. And the build-up here flows so simply but keeps pulling you in. I'm curious, though, why you classify this as (pre-)Sam/Dean, 'cause it just seemed Sam/Dean-ish to me. *quirks eyebrow*

[moveablehistory]

Haha, thanks. :D I'm kind of afraid that I can mostly only write in that style, oops. ;))

I call it (pre-)Sam/Dean, because it wasn't exactly their idea, and it doesn't become theirs until close to the end. My premise is that Sam is addicted, not that he necessarily wants it. When he does - then it's Sam/Dean. In my head. I think perhaps I overthought it or something. ;))

[eboniorchid]

Ah, see, I still call things Sam/Dean even if it wasn't their idea, I mean ... dude ... sex pollen, succubi-made-us-do-it, etc. ... all of those just count as Sam/Dean to me. But I love this idea of Sam being addicted. It's so ...hot and awesome and just strange enough to be plausible in their weird little world. Heh. :D

[moveablehistory]

I don't know. :)) I mean, you're right, yes, I just overthought the pairing/dynamics thereof, I think.

Also - Have you read rei_c's Five Districts, Five Drugs series? Since then, I've been really interested in the whole idea of addiction. Thanks. :D

[thinkofaname]

Eeeee. This was wonderful. Just flowy and lovely.

typo? overdoes = overdose? :D

Otherwise, wow. <3

[stormcloude]

Another type:can't just touch your or something

But nice and smooth and I sorta think Sam must have been taking advantage in there, huh? ^_^

Thanks for sharing.

[moveablehistory]

Oh heavens, thanks for catching those typos! I'm terrible at seeing them sometimes, heh. And I'm glad you like it! Sam was kind of definitely taking advantage. ;))

[athenejen]

Awww, this is really lovely. I like the concept, and the pacing of the unfolding of it worked well here.

Sam waved his hands helplessly: "I just want you."

I know I'm echoing, but well, this line really got to me. I had to stop and wave my hands helplessly in response. So sweet, so Sam.

[moveablehistory]

Thank you! I'm glad that the concept worked - I was a little afraid that it was a little too clichŽd, but yes. :D

[lissa_bear]

Very nice.

"Saved it for you, sweetheart."

"I bet you did, too," Dean said, face muffled. "Bet you were gonna cry, too, if you weren't so-"

Heh, I love that exchange.

[moveablehistory]

I think that section of dialogue is my favourite in the whole piece. :D Thank you!