Deus Ex Machina

Apr 11, 2006 17:50

title: Deus Ex Machina
rating: PG
disclaimer: This is a derivative work and no profit is being made.
notes: Spoilers for the pilot and The Journey Home; warnings for very mild implied Sam/Dean that you could really just ignore if you want. I wrote this after considering the prominence of the Impala in both the show and in the fic, and I noted that ( Read more... )

verse: deus ex machina, length: -1000, rating: 14a, pairing: none, genre: drama, fandom: supernatural

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elle_dritch April 11 2006, 22:18:04 UTC
OMG! Love! Buckets of love in your direction!

It knows that the dean part and the sam part are supposed to fit together somehow, but it seems like some alignment must be off, or maybe the metal's been stripped, or maybe there's a crack somewhere, but it knows that those parts must just be missing some important (mechanical or something like that it thinks) pieces and when those pieces are recovered, they will stop somewhere (like a 'motel' or maybe a 'bed and breakfast' - its favorite because it might not get rained or sunshined on).

*Whimpers hopelessly before gnawing on own fist.* Oh God. Yes, the alignment should be lying on the backseat, rubbing against each other. Clever car! *Pets it and you for the sheer mind-melting funny and non-explicit hot boy slash* Thank you. I am running off to friend you because hello? Genius. Hope you don't mind.

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moveablehistory April 11 2006, 22:26:17 UTC
Heheheh! :)

Alas, I am incapable of writing porn, so I must resort to implictness and innuendo. LOL. :)

And yay friends. :)

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Weeee first post:0) sethra2000 April 11 2006, 22:18:31 UTC
I've necer done that before..

Ok, I so loved this and now I want more Metallicar POV, cause it's just way cool... and 'cause I love the Car, it's so much a character all on it's own, especially in fic.

Congrats on being the first with this POV, you did great. It would be great to see the brothers developing relationship from the cars POV.

I'll stop rmabling now

Sethra

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Re: Weeee first post:0) moveablehistory April 11 2006, 22:29:03 UTC
Yay, I'm the first for something. :)

And thanks. :D

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penndragon April 11 2006, 22:21:10 UTC
It's late so I'm not particularly coherent, but I adore you right now, you know that? :D

I've been jonesing for someone to write from Metallicar's POV. Don't ask me why, it started as a joke in IM with warchio that if the car could talk it'd have some kick ass stories to tell (as well as some hot porn to share, and as

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penndragon April 11 2006, 22:24:25 UTC
Crap! LJ ate my comment. It obviously objected to my mentioning hot porn :b

What I started to say before I was so rudely interrupted, was... as warchio and I are obviously going to Special Hell we tend to dwell on the hot porn :D

Seriously, I adore this, and I love Metallicar's voice.

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moveablehistory April 11 2006, 22:28:06 UTC
Silly LJ. :)

Someone needs to write Metallicar POV porn RIGHT NOW. I would nominate myself, except I can't write porn at all, but still. RIGHT NOW. :)

And thanks. I was hoping the Metallicar's voice would come across alright. :)

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innie_darling April 11 2006, 22:37:49 UTC
I really liked this. Metallicar just starting to figure things out is so intriguing.

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moveablehistory April 12 2006, 00:51:57 UTC
I like the idea of the car just waking up one day and going, "Huh?"

Glad you liked. :)

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geminigrl11 April 11 2006, 23:58:52 UTC
Very, very, very cool.

It knows it has a sam part, although it doesn't know if the sam part was broken or if they just couldn't get a replacement in from somewhere so the john and dean parts somehow managed without. It doesn't like managing without.

It knows when they find a replacement for the sam part (although it's not sure that it's a proper replacement, it feels just as broken as before)

Awwwwwww. Love this. Love Metallicar POV. :)

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moveablehistory April 12 2006, 00:57:32 UTC
Oh, you're welcome. :) Yay for Metallicar POV. :)

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