in a brand new west

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title. in the brand new west
rating. PG, for the most part. Gets R-ish towards the end with a nice PWP finish.
characters/pairings. Jensen Ackles/Jared Padalecki. Minor OMCs + OFCs, with appearances by Sandy(?) and the The Amazing Mechanic!dogs Sadie and Harley.
warnings. General Narrative Strangeness, "experimental" "writing", a Scene (or several

Comments

[deirdre_c]

Yay! So glad you posted it, honey! It was so, so fun watching it evolve! I just re-read it as a whole and couldn't stop smiling. Terrific!

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\o/!!

Success. ♥!!

[ghost1880]

*is grinning so hugely*

the ship is a total voyeur!

that awesomeness asidethere's uh... a whole damn lot i'd love to point out individually, but wow, it would pretty much be the whole thing.

it's such an odd perspective to write from and you made it work so well! gorgeous, hilarious, clever, hot and sweet all at once. <3

[moveablehistory]

The ship is definitely a voyeur. In a purely ship sort of way! :D

Thank you so much - I'm glad that the perspective worked. :D

[tsuki_no_bara]

...i read this whole thing out loud to myself, because i'm alone in the office and i can. i love it. ^_^ it reads really well, and it's funny and the boys are adorable, and i like the slowly dissipating awkwardness over jensen ordering a girl - and jared expecting a girl - and both of them getting each other instead. and the last scene, with jensen's peeping tom ship - sweet and fluffy and still really hot.

[moveablehistory]

Out loud! *considers doing that as well* I think it would be really funny to read out loud. I really want to now. :) I hadn't considered how it would read aloud, hmm. :)

Thanks, thanks and thanks. :DD

[tsuki_no_bara]

it's got a really nice conversational style that sounds good out loud. it's really easy to read. do it, do it. :D

[ladyjanelly]

Oh god, I love this so much. The awkward narrator and the voyeur ship and Jen's mom and the dogs and everything. Experimental fanfic is great, and I laughed so hard the cats looked at me funny.

Hilarious and tender and perfect.

[moveablehistory]

\o/!!!

AWESOME. I'm SO glad the narrator came across like that (mostly because I'm the narrator, and dude, was it awkward or what, awesome. :)) and I'm so glad you weren't thrown off by the experimental sort of aspect.

Thank you. ;D

[tabaqui]

Oh, man, loved that!
In Spaaaaaace!

I love all the little asides and the ship POV and...
Yeah. Just - fun and funny and good stuff!
Yay!

[moveablehistory]

that's exactly how I pronunced it. in spaaaccceee the final frontier!

thanks thanks. wheee!!

[tabaqui]

Heeee!

I was actually picturing Pigs! In! Spaaaaaaaaaaace! from the muppet show.

...

What? They had Luke Skywalker on there once!

[belovedsnail]

...i'm so glad it wasn't just me doing the Pigs! In! Spaaaaaaaace! thing in my head. my parents were big muppet show fans back in the day.