Comments | thistlerose: [fic] A Dwindling Pool of Light

thistlerose

[fic] A Dwindling Pool of Light

Jul 08, 2007 20:22

A Dwindling Pool of Light

Fandom: Firefly
Rating: same as the show
Ships: allusions for former Mal/River and possibly future Mal/Zoe
Summary: Many years in the future, Mal still observes Unification Day his own way.
A/N: Many thanks for elspethsheir for the quick beta read! This is about 1,500 words. The title is from a quotation by Joseph Featherstone.

( Over the course of his life, Malcolm Reynolds has found himself on the wrong side of many a cell door. From the Rim's crude metal boxes to the austere Core prisons, he reckons he's seen them all, could probably write a book if someone offered him enough platinum for it. )

fic: firefly: char.: zoe, fic: firefly, fic: 2007, fic: firefly: char.: mal

Comments 11

musesfool July 9 2007, 02:04:39 UTC

Sad and lovely.

thistlerose July 9 2007, 02:27:24 UTC

Thank you! :)

mellafe July 9 2007, 03:12:10 UTC

Oh, that was... I don't have a word. Sad but it made me smile at the end, and the images are so subtle but real. I really liked it.

Yay, Lisa is a GREAT beta. :p

thistlerose July 9 2007, 15:50:15 UTC

THank you! :)

aworldinside July 9 2007, 08:32:15 UTC

Lovely. I especially liked your Mal voice.

thistlerose July 9 2007, 15:50:35 UTC

Thank you so much! :)

gwendolyngrace July 9 2007, 14:07:30 UTC

And there's not even any Chinese!

I dunno...my heart breaks for Mal about this. To put down the Alliance but lose Serenity? I don't know if he'd think that's a fair trade.

So sad. But well done.

thistlerose July 9 2007, 15:55:15 UTC

I suspect Mal did some swearing in Chinese; I just didn't write it. :)

Thank you so much!

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thistlerose July 10 2007, 13:05:28 UTC

Wow. Thank you SO much! :)