[fic+ commentary] My Heroine Pretend

[thistlerose]

My Heroine Pretend
with commentary

Fandom: HP
Ship: Neville/Luna
Rating: PG
Summary: Neville and Luna think they've found a real Wazrel - at last!
A/N: gehayi requested commentary on this story. The original is here.

Comments

[gehayi]

Oh, that was lovely. Thank you. I love imperious Luna and heroic-but-still-suffering-from-self-esteem-issues Neville and Luna Logic and the time-traveling agents and the Wazrel. And I really had no idea that it was so hard for you to write this; I thought that you just had other things to do and therefore hadn't got round to it.

Brilliant story, and excellent commentary!

[thistlerose]

Thanks. :)

It was a combination of things that made this fic such a struggle. I had no idea it would exceed 1,500 words, I had other commitments, and I didn't think there was much interest in it.

I'll get to the Narnia story in a bit. I wrote that one so long ago, I'll be to reread it.

[secondsilk]

Oh, Neville and Luna, they're so lovely together.
And it's great reading the commentary, expecially after DH with I like the idea of Neville doing something import, but on his own. Or not with the Trio, anyway. Because that was so awesome.

Nowadays I can't see the words "serious business" without laughing.
I pronounce it srs bsns, too.

[thistlerose]

Thank you! :)