Comments | thistlerose: [hp fic] Hose (Sirius, PG)

thistlerose

[hp fic] Hose (Sirius, PG)

Apr 15, 2006 22:18

Hose

Fandom: HP
Rating: PG
Characters: Sirius, Harry (background Sirius/Remus, but it's mostly gen)
Summary: Sirius bonds with his fourteen-month-old godson.
A/N: This one is for dramaphile, who wanted a story about this line from Close To Heaven: So, Harry-or-Rose (or “Hose”, as Sirius called the unborn baby when Lily wasn’t listening) was awake, too. ( Read more... )

fic: hp: pairing: sirius/remus, fic: hp (harry potter), fic: 2006, fic: favorites

Comments 96

rynne April 16 2006, 03:42:43 UTC

Ack. How could something so cute be so heartbreaking? I loved Sirius wanting to call Harry Hose, and "pah'oo" turning into "Pafoo", but then Sirius, talking about Regulus and Remus...ouch.

Loved it.

thistlerose April 17 2006, 00:44:28 UTC

Thank you so much! :)

amberlynne April 16 2006, 03:43:20 UTC

AW man. *sob* I was all "oh, cute! Harry and Sirius!" And then you had to go and break my damn heart. WHY?!?! Why did they have to be so stupid?

thistlerose April 17 2006, 00:52:04 UTC

Er. Sorry. :)

Thank you!

If they were mine they'd probably still be this stupid because it's fun, but I'd let them have a happy ending eventually. *sigh*

tsubasa_lupin April 16 2006, 04:09:00 UTC

That was just lovely T______T lovely sad I should say, poor Padfoot, just realizing that he would choose to kill Remus instead of seeing Harry getting hurt..

It was a beautiful fic ^^

thistlerose April 17 2006, 00:56:45 UTC

Thank you so much. :)

topaz_eyes April 16 2006, 04:10:43 UTC

Awww... yes, I can see Sirius confessing his heart out to Harry, commiserating with him and all. Sirius' love and pain and confusion about Remus ring loud and clear here, and you've captured both his tenderness and his exasperation with howling Harry (and I've been there, so I can relate *g*). This is lovely.

thistlerose April 17 2006, 00:58:15 UTC

Thank you! I'm so glad Sirius came out well. :)

ter369 April 16 2006, 04:15:02 UTC

Lovely. And sad, as you promised.

I like how there are several storms; the one outside the house, Harry's mercurial emotions, and the storm of confusion inside Sirius.

Before you archive this: there seems to be a missing verb before "bubotuber pus"

thistlerose April 17 2006, 01:05:18 UTC

It started off not being sad. I'm not sure what happened. ;)

Before you archive this: there seems to be a missing verb before "bubotuber pus"

Eep! Thanks for catching that! And I'm glad you liked the fic!