fic: With Your Empty Smile and Your Hungry Heart (ST: TNG)

Jul 07, 2010 21:55

Title: With Your Empty Smile and Your Hungry Heart
Fandom: Star Trek TNG
Rating: teen
Characters: Tasha Yar
Contains: assault, attempted rape
Notes: 1,060 words. For hc_bingo (prompt: assault). References the episodes "Where No One Has Gone Before" (S1) and "Legacy" (S4).

Summary: Turkana IV was going to kill her, she knew, if she didn't get out. Soon.

She kept running. )

fic: st tng/ds9 (star trek), fic: 2010, fic: hc_bingo

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saavikam77 July 8 2010, 12:52:02 UTC
Gah!!

That ending was perfectly gutting.

*loves*

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thistlerose July 8 2010, 15:30:18 UTC
Thank you so much!

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kkglinka July 8 2010, 22:05:17 UTC
And I'm just over here happy to see a Tasha fic. You know it's a sorry state when you get as far as the headers and you're already going, Hurray! But yeah, when you live day to day, and the days blend together with relentless similarity, the future becomes someday only you shouldn't put off for tomorrow what you can do today. There were a lot of missed opportunities with a character that could have served as a foil to Federation utopia because of that.

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thistlerose July 9 2010, 01:49:58 UTC
She would have been great. I can understand why the actress left, but I wish they'd re-cast or left more of a loophole for the character.

Thanks for reading! :)

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eru_a July 9 2010, 07:43:49 UTC
Ha, I'm also happy to see Tasha fic. I must admit I'm not a great fan of ultra-short stories (except maybe drabbles), but I'm impressed with your writing style, it's confident and elegant and mature.

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thistlerose July 9 2010, 14:35:45 UTC
Thank you!

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captaincadet July 9 2010, 16:49:13 UTC
oh yay, tasha fic!

i was so heartbroken when i realized she wasn't coming back. and oh, that last bit reminds me and it makes me sad but i love it.

wonderful work. she is a hero.

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thistlerose July 9 2010, 18:14:21 UTC
Thank you so much!

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shinealightonme February 4 2012, 08:02:59 UTC
I loved this story! There's not nearly enough Tasha fic out there, and this was such a grim but good look at her background. And I love how you wrote her and Picard's interaction.

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thistlerose February 4 2012, 19:19:43 UTC
Thank you so much!

I always loved Tasha. She was always so brash and vulnerable. I wish they hadn't killed her off for good. *sigh*

I'm so glad you liked this!

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