Comments | thistlerose: [fic] The Next Time You Say Forever 1/6 (Star Trek)

thistlerose

[fic] The Next Time You Say Forever 1/6 (Star Trek)

Jul 27, 2009 17:38

The Next Time You Say Forever
Part One of Six

Fandom: Star Trek: Reboot
Rating: Adult (sex, violence, and language)
Ships/Characters: Kirk/McCoy, Spock/Uhura, Joanna McCoy, Spock Prime
Summary: After his ex-wife's death, McCoy is forced to leave the Enterprise to look after his teenage daughter. Under normal circumstances, this would be the end ( Read more... )

fic: st aos: char.: joanna, fic: 2009, fic: st aos (star trek), fic: st aos: pairing: kirk/mccoy, fic: favorites

Comments 85

centerspire July 27 2009, 23:59:17 UTC

GAH. GAH. GAH! Oh, Bones...

This is a sequel?? Runs backwards to read other parts!!!

thistlerose July 28 2009, 00:41:28 UTC

It is a sequel! (And I don't want to toot my own horn, but there's some stuff that's referred to in Chapter Two that harkens back to those other fics.)

Poor Bones. *pets him* It took me a while to decide who suffers most here, but it's definitely Bones.

Thank you!

centerspire July 28 2009, 03:43:06 UTC

GAH X 1000000000000000000000 NOW THAT I'VE READ THE ONES THAT CAME BEFORE.

NOW I SORT OF FEEL WORSE FOR JIM BECAUSE HE DOESN'T KNOW WHY BONES RAN OUT!!!

*CAPSLOCKFLAIL*

thistlerose July 28 2009, 04:26:25 UTC

*petpetpet*

Yeah, they... yeah. :)

ignipes July 27 2009, 23:59:39 UTC

AARGH YOU BROKE THEM.

NOW GO PUT THEM BACK TOGETHER.

Please?

thistlerose July 28 2009, 00:42:08 UTC

With duct tape and kisses.

Later. ;)

sangueuk July 28 2009, 00:09:49 UTC

This was wonderful, poor boys! Can't wait to read the rest.

Half a dozen thoughts crowded in his brain. Each one shamed him with its selfishness, This I thought showed great emotional intelligence on you part.

Thanks for sharing.

thistlerose July 28 2009, 00:43:05 UTC

Well, he's thirty. He ought to have acquired some emotional maturity by then. *g* Though perhaps if he'd been less stoic, Bones wouldn't have walked out.

Thank you so much!

blcwriter July 28 2009, 00:35:31 UTC

It's not like Scotty's got a distillery down in engineering.
&&&
HE DOESN'T??? :)

Of course Bones freaks out. GAH.

Wonderful start and achy as hell. Looking forward to where you go next with this.

thistlerose July 28 2009, 00:48:01 UTC

That was one of my beta reader's comments too. *g* I say, next time they're fixed up, they get a distillery for Scotty.

Thank you!!

missmarie9 July 28 2009, 00:38:11 UTC

Oh, I can't wait for an update. You started so powerfully.

thistlerose July 28 2009, 00:48:19 UTC

Thank you!! :)