Fic: What I Really Want (1/?)

[thislittlespark]

TItle: What I Really Want, Chapter 1
Pairing: Klaine! With Niff on the side. 
Rating: PG at the moment, will be NC-17 as it progresses. 
Wordcount: 1900 words this part. 
Spoilers: none. 
Summary: When Kurt Hummel transfers to Dalton Academy, he finds himself targeted by the resident spoilt rich kid, Blaine Anderson. Blaine will do anything to get into

Comments

[star55]

I am very intrigued to see where you take this! I don't think I've ever read rich-spoiled-brat Blaine before.
Loving the first chapter! ♥

[thislittlespark]

I don't think I've ever read it either, but I've seen it in so many fandoms that I'm surprised it hasn't appeared yet haha.
I'm glad you like it so far, I just posted the second chapter to my journal, I hope you enjoy, and thanks for commenting! :)

[star55]

Awesome! I'll go check that out now. =)

[mymanhas2jobs]

This is off to a really great start! I love those Casanova!Blaine fics, okay? :)
My only advice right now is to maybe ease up on the epithets -- "the other boy", "the blonde", etc. It's really not much of a problem to keep saying their names over and over.
But yeah, other than that I really like this and can't wait to see what happens next!

[thislittlespark]

thank you! I really really appreciate the con-crit. I am always self-conscious about that issue, there was a scene in this chapter where Kurt doesn't know Blaine's name, which I think is why I was using epithets so much because I was trying to get that across. So any extra advice you can give me on that would be greatly appreciated :D

I just put up the second chapter to my journal if you are interested, and thanks again for reading/commenting.

[blue_peridot]

oooh, intriguing! i like how ridiculously, over-the-top cocky and arrogant blaine is, and i like that kurt isn't impressed. i hope blaine turns out to be a decent person when he tones it down, though, else i do not approve of him for kurt! lol. i really want to see how this plays out.